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雅思大作文满分标准解读




<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　<b>要点 1 ---- Task Achievement</b></span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　1. fully addresses all parts of the task</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　标准解读：</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　考生在写作时首先要仔细阅读题干，读懂题目要求。 大作文标题通常分两个部分， 第一部分描述写作内容，第二部分提出写作要求。 例如，Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.即写作时要陈述原因以及相关例证。 这里的例证可以来自于考生自己的知识或经历。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　2. clearly presents a fully developed response</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　标准解读：</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(1)完整、有逻辑地谋篇布局。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(2)写作目的清晰。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(3)主要内容完整、切题、正确、有理有据: 考生要能自然地展开论述，善始善终地表达观点、陈述事实。所举论据能很好的支持论点。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　<b>要点 2 ---- Coherence and Cohesion</b></span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　1. uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　标准解读：</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　好文章的最高境界就是：“连贯得让人没有感觉”。也就是说不刻意用连接词，不滥用模板句和过渡句, 而做到句与句之间逻辑清晰，语意连贯，连接词和短语的运用都是信手拈来，整个文章浑然一体。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　文章的连贯要注意以下几个问题：</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(1)段落衔接自然。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(2)论证时注意思路清晰，过渡自然。好文章是由思想编织的。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(3)适当运用连接词。使用连接词的目的是为了更强大的逻辑引导、语气强调、或情感色彩的渲染。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　2. skillfully manages paragraphing</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　熟练运用分段技巧,在进行段落划分时要注意以下几个问题：</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(1)根据文章脉络划分自然段</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(2)段落衔接自然</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　(3)每段主旨和要点明确</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　<b>要点 3 ---- Lexical resource</b></span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　Uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’.</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　用词要多样、精确、自然、有风格。个别小错误在所难免。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　1.多样：体现出多变的用词。考生不仅仅要会用最基础的词汇，同时要能体现出运用高端书面词汇的能力。 另外，考生还应注意变换地运用同义词，而不是重复同一个词。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　2.精确：所用词在句中语意连贯正确，词性准确，感情色彩贴切，用法地道，拼写无误。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　3.自然：灵活用词，不刻意堆砌辞藻，用词恰到好处，为文章的表意而服务。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　4.有风格：用词能体现出作者的文风，或端庄严谨，或清新自然，或幽默诙谐。这一点适合已经有比较高的文字功底的考生关注。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　5.小错误：满分文章也并非一点错误都没有。写作时不要为了刻意追求完美而影响了表意和流利度。</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　<b>要点 4 ---- Grammatical range and accuracy</b></span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　Uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’.</span></span></div>
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<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　1.Wide range of structures： 要体现出能运用各种句式结构的能力，包括简单句、各类从句、分词短语、并列句等等。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　2.Flexibility： 灵活运用各类句型。文章长短句交错，每句话的形式结构恰到好处，为合理传递信息表达思想而服务。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　3.Accuracy： 尽量避免语法错误，包括时态、语态、句式、标点的错误等。</span></span></div>
<div><span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:x-small;"><span style="line-height:24px;font-size:14px;">　　4.Rare minor errors： 满分作文也并非要完全避免语法错误。考生在写作时应在清晰表达思路的前提下，尽量注意语法问题。</span></span></div>

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