啊~~我又来了，求批作文
今天把之前写的一篇作文摸出来改了改，原来那个跑题太远了<span></span> <br />
突然发现自己写作文很容易就跑题<span></span> <br />
重写了之后发上来给大家看看，请狠狠的拍<span></span> <span></span> <br />
另问下，这篇我在写完后就在想，需不需要在最后加一段表明下自己的意见？因为题目里面没有叫give your opinion，所以在想要不要给？或者说，最后要不要总结下。。。就这样行不行？<br />
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题目：unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. what are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty five hours?<br />
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It is said people were working longer hours now than 30 years ago even though unemployment was at 2.5 million. The working week should be cut to 35 hours to help boost the economy and improve quality of life, a left-wing think tank has said. <br />
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As the politicians intended, cutting working hours helps the regression of economy. Being in recession since the financial crisis broke out in 2008, the world economy need a strong impulse, namely substantial consumption increase, to recover. And cutting working week increases consumption because people will have more time to shop. Increased consumption in turn boosts the production and therefore brings economy into an upward spiral. <br />
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Besides, shorter working week gives people more time to be with families and friends than before. Nowadays, people work forty or even fifty hours a week which makes them have no time, and too exhausted, to spend on families.<br />
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But reducing working hours can have some disadvantages. Firstly, it at the same time reduces people’s income. Employees are normally paid according to the length of working, so if they work less they earn less. Secondly, this will make the public lose their faith of economic recovery because the underlying meaning of this ordinance, although is actually not, is that the society does not need people to work as long as before. If so, there might be a crisis of confidence in the economy.
I am back too.
兄弟你算是跑题专家了。咱们先翻译一下题目，失业是很多发达国家目前最大的问题之一，每周工作时间削减至三十五小时的利与都是什么？这个利与弊不是让你漫天讨论，简而言之，这是个主题套主题的题，无论利还是弊，不能离开失业这个主题中的主题。在这就不罗列你列的那些的正面观点反面观点了，很会跑题。
小胖啊，给指导下呗，这样的题目，他的topic到底是什么？是unemployment还是cutting working week?
你的意思是说要写cutting working week对unemployment的影响？
尼玛这题目这太BT了
单一topic的我都没搞清楚呢，还复合topic
就是缩短工作时间对失业这个现实的正面和负面影响。我们读书时老师说过，题目里的每个字都是关键的，绝对不能忽视。
或者这么说，题库再不提高难度，雅思作文就没法判了，模板都在用，内容没漏洞，分数谁高谁低？这种题在业内叫做陷阱题，中国人早就用了。
我看到题目的时候就很纳闷，怎么感觉有两个topic呀，那我怎么写啊？结果。。。就跑了。。。
反正我中文作文也经常跑题。。。
英文作文也延续了中文作文的作风
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