咖啡闲情 发表于 2012-4-23 09:25:33

4月21日作文回忆求评分



A sizable&nbsp;&nbsp;parents are inclind to reward their children for their good performance,while others are likly to punish them especially when they did things wronly to educate young men. I belive both ways are effect to education.<br />
Giving punishing to youngsters can help them&nbsp;&nbsp;not to conduct the similar mistakes later. As we all know,people easily forget mistakes,children in particular.<br />
Therefore,it is important to punish young people and impress them.Indeed the punishment can decrease the opptunities that they conduct the similar misktake.Moreover,youths are vulnerable to be atracted by bad things.Porper punishing can avoid them doing wrong behaviors again.Although,they need to be paid,it is worth for them to grow up<br />
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On the other hand,prasing students is a good way to encourgh them to do better.Some parents are likely to give awards to their children for their good behavior in schools which is useful to build up their confidence,comparing with others punish them when their children failed. Besides,a student will try to do better next time if they are prasied this time for the same behavior.<br />
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In colusion,what will happen is both ways are effective for educating students.Only is the complex means combined both ways sutiable for morden youths.<br />
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咖啡闲情 发表于 2012-4-23 13:55:50



没有人评嘛？有6吗？


咖啡闲情 发表于 2012-4-23 22:54:42



不会写的太差了把


zaprlsggg4 发表于 2012-4-24 05:16:43



字数有点少了


huang3059 发表于 2012-4-24 14:12:23



不是吧，两百字都不到！


咖啡闲情 发表于 2012-4-24 20:40:00



不是啊,我没有回忆全,差不多这个样子吧


金刚1985 发表于 2012-4-25 02:56:22



5分吧，估计


大概昆仑山 发表于 2012-4-25 05:48:22



论坛现在人气不足，我觉得文章字数比较少。要继续努力！！！会更好的，改一下继续贴上来


西丽湖啦 发表于 2012-4-25 13:34:19



inclined和likely楼主是故意没加e么？类似的还有wrongly少了g，conclusion少了n，如果写作的时候拼写就这样，平时可得注意点啊。。


咖啡闲情 发表于 2012-4-25 21:26:24



恩，好的，看来还要好好注意拼写啊&nbsp;&nbsp;谢谢谢谢


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