[雅思写作] 回忆10.12号写作taskii 求评分
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题目和答案都是我回忆出来的,应该大体相近,不会有太大的偏差. 我是第一次考鸭, 得到的分数和我想像的有很大的出入,拜托各位给点评一下,看看这篇文章值几分<br />
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Some people think reading is the best way for adults to acquire knowledge after graduation from school. Some people think there are better approaches. Discuss both views and give your own opinion<br />
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The debate on what is the best way for adults to acquire new knowledge after graduation from school has never stopped. Some people would suggest reading is unquestionably the best approach, as it only needs a book and a quiet and peaceful reading environment. Some other people may hold different ideas and say there are some other better ways such as watching TV or listening to radio. Both of these views have their own merits, but to myself, I am inclined to take side to the latter one.<br />
It is quite obvious that reading is the most economic and effective way for us to gain knowledge. As mentioned above, just bringing a book and sitting in a caffe or library, we can enjoy our reading time with much pleasure. And don't forget reading the most familiar way to us as well, as it's the main way we used to learn new things and took examinations when we were students in school. After so many years of reading, we just get used to it and it is more than natural for us to keep reading to acquire new knowledge after graduation.<br />
However, whether reading is the best way of learning new things is a different story. Some people would regard reading as boring and tedious, and time-consuming as well. We need to spend a wealth of time to finish a book, which we simply can't afford after graduation. As most of us, or all of us will have to find a job after graduation. We need to face up our job responsibilities which in most of time involve a tight time schedule. After some people get married and have their own families, they need to face household chores as well. So in this case, watching TV or listening to radio may be more advisable. As they both require less time and can be more interactive and interesting. Travelling could be another good idea, as we can admire the spectaculars natural scenery and in the meanwhile, talk with people from all walk of life to learn new things.<br />
In conclusion, reading is a good way for us to gain knowledge after graduation. But for some people who are too busy to afford reading, watching TV or listening to radio programs may be a better approach. We should decide our own ways to learn new things based on our own situation.<br />
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我觉得这篇文章丝毫的新意也写不出来., 但总体应该是通顺的吧?<br />
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刚刚统计了一下,字数竟然有396个!!! 怪不和当时答题纸写不下... 我都写到 最后一行下面的空白处里去了
估计给教官的印像是就又臭又长吧....无语啊...
开头段也太长太啰嗦了吧~
感觉条理也不清楚，正文第一段应该是重点论述reading是怎么个好法，另一段就是提出另外获取知识的其他好方法，比如说看电视，听广播，重点是好在什么地方，可是你关于这方面论述太少了吧。最后结论，reading并不一定能说是最好的，还有其他很有效的办法，这取决于个人习惯等。
我也是菜鸟，也在学习写作中。
个人意见，5分吧~
不要打我啊楼主
另外我很好奇，在这么短的时间内，你怎么能写出这么多来啊，我快要一鸭了，很担心来不及~
估计在6-6.5。 有几个错误估计是你打的时候打错了，I am inclined to.... 还有cafe，boring 和tedious是一个同义词不可以用and，挑一个用。 总之这篇文章有些跑题，分析和论证不够。
在task response 5.5-6, gramma 6-6.5 (例如最后一句话的最后一个词应用复数)，连接6-6.5，vocab 6-6.5，
多谢！！typo已改正。。
我瞎说说 你说你认为后一种好，但是你没有坚持写出后一种的好处。到第三段就改到其他方面去了，和你前面的论点不一致。虽然没有太多的语法错误，但是中心思想和结构不是很好。
但是这么短的时候可以写出这么多东西，还是
一般自己写出来的东西都会觉得顺眼,,所以自己给自己打的分都偏高..
很希望大家给这篇文章打个分,并指出问题出在什么地方
我自己是这样认为的,但肯定不够客观:
TA: 不知道...
CC: 7分
LR: 6分(无任何大词)
GRAMER:6分(无复杂句)
所以总分应当介于6和7之间吧?
这篇文章只得了5.5,, 我实在是想不通. 我正考虑要不要复议呢
我觉得不用复议了，可以理解5.5分是符合的，确实有些跑题。不知道你的task1写的怎么样