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5-2 task2<br />
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.<br />
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.<br />
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After a long school life, the young people are advised to have a break through working or travelling outside. In this essay, I will state my opinion about their decision to do some social activities before their entry into the university.<br />
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The first and most obvious benefit from working outside during this period is that the young people can learn more about their future study. Everyone may have his own and different interest in subjects in university and chose different work, which is relative to his future major. During the work they can gain some special technology and social skills, which they can’t learn in university. At the meantime they also can get warm-up knowledge that they will learn in their major.<br />
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Furthermore, young people can find that whether or not the work is suitable for them after a period of working. We can imagine the two raising results; one is that they find the work and their future majors fix them very well so that it can stimulate their talents and interests in their future study. The other is that they don’t like the work at all, but they still have opportunity to make a change in their future majors. No matter how, they benefit a lot from their working or travelling experience. <br />
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Admittedly, one-year work or traveling is superfluous for young people. they should give priority to their study. Getting a degree from the university is far more important than working. The professional knowledge learned from university makes it possible to contribute to the society and provide them more chances of being successful. <br />
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In short, young people can finally profit from doing social activities such as working or travelling outside after graduating from high school. Making money and spending in these activities are not their aims. Therefore, I believe these activities play a critical role for getting ready for their future life.