号称是老外,没见到真人,都是网上改的
不多从改的情况看,似乎不像国人的文笔,例如:
可怜的总评:
(Rate: 4 – 4.5)
Overall Comment: This is definitely not written at a University lecture level. Language choice and graph analysis is very simplistic and in one case incorrectly interpreted. Logical thought sequence is hard to follow. Introductory and summary paragraphs are non-existent.
批注:
All paragraphs, except dialogue, should be a minimum of at least 3 sentences in length. This is especially important in the introductory and summary paragraphs of an essay