TM STREEC $ 俗称裸奔法,由以下Idea的首字母组成,每个idea又延伸到第二项idea方便记忆。
背得滚瓜烂熟后在考场上可以迅速通过下面的idea分析出正方或反方的素材。
T= Technology - Efficiency
M= Mind - Soul
S= Society - Crime
T= Time - Space
R= Right - Responsibility
E= Environment - Health
E= Employment - Competition
C= Culture - Population
$= Money - Fun
作者: 无聊的一族 时间: 2010-12-1 05:38
虽然有裸奔法,但我的第一篇作文花了近两个小时才搞定,知道中文的想法了,用英文就表达不出来,光知道词汇了,不知道用哪个合适,看了很多范文,但真到自己写的时候,开头,结尾都不知道怎么编排。一句话要改个好几次才能表达出来。介词也不知道该用in,on,by,光背词汇没背用法,有些词组介词是固定的,或换一个意思完全就不一样了。例如benefit sth.,不跟介词是对。。。有益,若要表达从。。。获益就要benefit from sth.
不过楼主不用急,刚开始嘛,正常的,坚持每天写一篇,越写会约顺手的。刚开始写不出也可以参考点范文,翻翻词典看词组用得对不对,不用顶在那里自己跟自己强较劲。但以后要逐渐脱离字典和范文,你会发现每天都在进步的。
刚写了一篇预测的作文,真TMD难,正面理由一堆,反面怎么都想不出来,但题目必须 Discuss both views ,这次超时了,花了一个多小时才写完,知道你急着考试,发上来咱们共勉吧。
1 Some people think the government should pay for citizens’health care and education while others argue that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Answer:
In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. Some people think that government should be accountable for paying for that but the others do not think so. This essey will discuss both sides in this debate.
There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.
So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.
In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status.
作者: 圈圈的圈圈 时间: 2010-12-3 18:56
In these day and age,????
There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. 不应该用respects.
For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc 有名词,形容词。应该是同一属性。
作者: 清澈海洋 时间: 2010-12-4 02:36
Answer:
In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. ....
There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.
So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.
In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status