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作者: 孙菲菲儿    时间: 2011-12-20 03:30
标题: 作文再批批批!!!!!


1. In some countries, most of the people prefer to rent a house rather than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house?<br />
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In the past, most people usually lived and worked in a place, and there was a belief that a stable living place is an indispensable part of raising a family. Now things are very different, most people choose to rent a house rather than buy one. As to the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house, opinions vary from person to person.<br />
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The primary advantage of renting a house is, of course, economical. As we know, nowadays with the rapid urbanization process, an increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. As a result, the price of houses in cities is soaring, and most people cannot afford to buy even a small flat. Compared with buying a house, renting one not only can save a large amount of money for people, but also provide people with an equal quality of accommodation, which means people would left with more money for improving their living standard or getting more education. Further, renting a house in more convenient than buying a house, since if we buy a house we need to spend a great deal of time decorating and furnishing the rooms. Finally, some people do not like to get stuck in a place for a life-long time. For them, renting a house is obvious a wiser option. <br />
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However, advantages usually go hand in hand with disadvantages. Firstly, statistics show that people who rent a house may not have a sense of belonging, which is the crucial part of happiness. Secondly, some landlords for the sake of pursuing maximum profits, they may rise the rental at any time, which means tenants will be kicked out if they do not pay more money. Thirdly, but not lastly, there are worries about that the social order is becoming worse because of the increase of floating people. <br />
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In conclusion, both sides are supported by sound reasons. An in all, it would be sensible to suggest to that people should make a choice according to their preference and personal circumstance.




作者: vfori    时间: 2011-12-20 08:11


已婚小胖现身,哈哈哈,来得早不如来得巧。
其实这还是一道政治小话题。NND新键盘没买好,粘滞感明显,今晚打字是要练手指头了。
为啥租房子,原因之一是在某些国家,穷老百姓一生也仅能买套房子,到日子了国家再收一大笔遗产税,变相收回去,所以这房子真不知是给谁买的。第二就是很多国家里人们的工作经常变动,人要跟着工作走,租房子就显得很方便,打个包就可以启程。租房的弊端么,首要的肯定是加大贫富差距,对社会发展及其不利——这是雅思考官最喜欢看到的答案,写了就至少给你凭空加1分,相信小胖没错的。不要小看这道居家题,背后也是有玄机的。
熟烂题目不怕,怕的是熟烂的仅仅是题目。哪怕做不到头头是道,但是要让考官看出来,讨论的内容接近或者趋于成熟深刻。



作者: 修水人    时间: 2011-12-20 14:37


05年以前的作文书还是比较靠谱的,不像现在花里胡哨就是不说有用的,大家要佩服的话,还是佩服小胖记忆力不错吧,以前看的作文剖析都还记得一些。



作者: 89后宋希小    时间: 2011-12-20 21:49


我的论点总是不给力, 自己都说服不了自己。 更别提成熟深刻了。



作者: 生意人家    时间: 2011-12-21 08:55


没关系,我那沧桑的前半生只是胡花乱造烧了很多钱,到过澳洲和新加坡而已,出去之后,再回头看以前不懂的东西就明白了很多。外国人很负责,出租的房子也弄得像个小旅馆,什么都不缺,而且还很舒服——谁都是从不懂到懂的。







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