今天花20分钟,写下了平生第一篇雅思小作文,题目就是剑7 test 1,评论5个国家的消费支出情况。心里没底,大家给点意见吧,尤其是那些雅思高人,拉兄弟一把吧。<br />
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Following is my writing:<br />
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Here is the table that reflect consumer spending on Food/drink/tabacco, clothing/footwear and leisure/education in following five countries: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Tureky in 2002.<br />
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For all countries spending on food/drink/tobacco is the main cost of life and major spending item. In Italy and Turkey, the percents are near 30%. In other three countries, they all are below 20% and Sweden is the lowest one with only 15.77%, only half of the Turkey which is 32.14%.<br />
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Spending on clothes in all five countries are below 10%. Italian spend more on this kind of item which is 9%. Sweden spent least on it with only 5.4%. The other three contries all spend around 6.5% on this item.<br />
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For Leisure/education, the spending of there countries all are below 5%. People in Turkey spent 4.35% of their spending on it, which is highest in all five countries in contrast to Spanish people who only spent 1.98% on it. Italy and Sweden spending are almost same, Italy is 3.2% while Sweden is 3.22%.<br />
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In Summary, the spending on food/drink/tabacco is the most important cost for all five countries. And it seems Italy spend much on clothing while Turkey pay more attention to leisure and education!