Happiness is considered very important in life.<br />
Why is it difficult to define?<br />
What factors are important in achieving happiness?<br />
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.<br />
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Undoubtedly, happiness is indeed very essential in human-being’s lives. It is, however, hard to give an accurate definition about happiness, because people judge the happiness by varying standards related to different surroundings and requirements. For instance, someone, like the businessman, may link the happiness to the amount of money they can earn and the poverties think the happiness lies in enough food, while some people associate the happiness with the loving relationship. Yet some others believe the spiritual paths, rather than either material world or emotion, are the only way to true happiness.<br />
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Although there are various definitions about happiness, the key influent factors still can be considered. Firstly, meeting the basic physical need is the necessary for achieving happiness. It is obvious that if a person is not satiated, he or she would have no other eager things but the food. To him or her, in that moment, happiness is having enough food. Secondly, safety is another key point in contributing to happiness because people under dangerous surroundings would definitely never feel happy. A sense of being respected also leads to happiness. A recent survey indicates that people with decent jobs are happier than the ones with unsatisfied jobs. Finally, the sense of fulfillment is indeed very important for happiness. Although the sense of fulfillment is built by varying ways, for instance, earning enough money, obtain high art achievement and so on, these different ways actually generate the sense of fulfillment and then it enhances the happiness.<br />
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In conclusion, the definition about happiness may vary from wide range, whilst the feelings about it are similar and can be abstracted. People could achieve happiness according the factors mentioned above under whatever situation they are confronting with.
作者: fds8x952w 时间: 2012-1-30 03:07
有几处语法错或者用词不当的地方。
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最大的问题，感觉问题论据不好....而且每个论点都没有充分展开。6有点悬。
个人意见，供参考。