我估计有可能是判为模板了。但是不是现成的模板，开头模板的痕迹重一些。贴出来给大家看看吧，顺便求批。
小作文可能TA有丢分，最后一问的when will you be available我理解成什么时候可以接电话了。因为我们公司写邮件的时候，大家都会说我什么时候不在公司，都是说available at 某个电话号码。（也不知道这样说对不对哈。）
You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining:
1. Why do you want to help
2. How can you help them
3. When will you be available
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire if I could do some work for your organization to provide some support to the elderly in the community. I understand that it would be voluntary and payment would not be necessary.
I come from a rural area of China. And when I was in the college I got numerous support from the society economically and emotionally. I just graduated this July, and I believe this is a good time to support back.
I am a software engineer, and if there is any work that entails computer repairing or software usage, I will be very delighted to provided help. I can do other things, however, like laundry work or cleaning. I would like to discuss with you further, and I am available at 010 12345678 every Monday and Wednesday morning through 9 O'clock to 12 O'clock.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jake
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作者: s1913dgoa 时间: 2011-12-18 18:03
大作文：
Some people are interested in national news, others think it is important to know about international news, discuss both views and give your opinion.
The past few decades have seen a considerable increase in the attention paid to the news. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the national news is more important than international news. In this essay, I will explore both views and provide my opinion.
Admittedly, national news is more related with our daily lives, be it the coming storm or the rise in CPI of last month. Therefore, there is no surprise that people would like to know about national news. Secondly, national news tends to be more reliable. This is due to the fact that, if it is not acquired from the original source, international news is often filtered or event modified by the government censorship. So people will get mislead.
Whilst the above discussion is valid, personally I believe that the benefits of knowing about international new far outweigh its drawbacks. Firstly, it is important to know about what happens in other countries, if one is doing trade globally, especially if he or she is trading oil or gold. Knowing about international news will help him or her to make wise decision. Secondly, as the borders across different countries are blurring, it requires us to know more about other cultures. Watching international news is a fantastic way to communicate. Thirdly, people can take advantage of know about international news. For example, when the price of house declined in America, many Chinese people went there and bought many houses and sold at a higher price later.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that both national and international news are important to us. And people should choose to learn about depends on their own situation.