Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in a apartment?<br />
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Everybody has the right to choose living in a house or apartment. Living in a house, indeed brings numerous amount of advantages. The merits of living in an apartment, however, can not be ignored as well. This essay will argue that the merits and demerits of living in a house or a apartment depend on personal wealth and preference.<br />
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It has witnessed there are enormous advantages in terms of cleaning, affordability and children’s growing up for the people who live in apartments recent years. To begin with, it is easy and less time-consuming to clean an apartment, which is extremely convenient for people to do housework. Moreover, average people are able to afford an apartment after saving money for several years, which relatively reduces the living pressure, especially for the poor people. Finally, children can hang out together, who lived in apartments located in the same community. Therefore, it is apt to cultivate their abilities of communication and cooperation, which plays an essential role in childhood. <br />
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Living in an apartment, admittedly, has many merits. Whereas, living in a house brings some people tons of merits as well. People lived in a house can enjoy their fascinating gardens or keep a pet playing in it, which is just a dream for poor people who can not afford a house. In addition, the privacy of people can be preserved well since there is sufficient space living in a house.<br />
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In conclusion, it is worth to live in house if people are wealthy and care much more their privacy. While living in an apartment is also a good choice for average people earned not adequate money.
作者: 2010哥依然寂寞 时间: 2012-2-24 03:29
Everybody has the right to choose living in a house or apartment. Living in a house, indeed brings numerous amount of advantages. The merits of living in an apartment, however, can not be ignored as well. This essay will argue that the merits and demerits of living in a house or a apartment depend on personal wealth and preference.
It has witnessed there are enormous advantages in terms of cleaning, affordability and children’s growing up for the people who live in apartments recent years. To begin with, it is easy and less time-consuming to clean an apartment, which is extremely convenient for people to do housework. Moreover, average people are able to afford an apartment after saving money for several years, which relatively reduces the living pressure, especially for the poor people. Finally, children can hang out together, who lived in apartments located in the same community. Therefore, it is apt to cultivate their abilities of communication and cooperation, which plays an essential role in childhood.
Living in an apartment, admittedly, has many merits. Whereas, living in a house brings some people tons of merits as well. People lived in a house can enjoy their fascinating gardens or keep a pet playing in it, which is just a dream for poor people who can not afford a house. In addition, the privacy of people can be preserved well since there is sufficient space living in a house.
There are also some drawbacks living in an apartment. People’s private space may be disturbed by neighbors. As neighbors live nearly, they might see others private things or events, as a consequence, the unexpected conflicts maybe occur. Empirical evidences show that people are hard to slacken their vigilance against their privacy when living in an apartment, which results in bad relaxation.
Some implied demerits will arise when living in a house. Several floors, as well as Staircase, are required to clean daily, which costs much time and increases the cost of maintenance.
In conclusion, it is worth to live in house if people are wealthy and care much more their privacy. While living in an apartment is also a good choice for average people earned not adequate money.
作者: 2010哥依然寂寞 时间: 2012-2-24 14:55
再顶一下~
作者: hgyo1809 时间: 2012-2-24 17:20
最好在第一段能给观点。另外，有些语法错误。
作者: vkgx4416 时间: 2012-2-24 22:52
最好在第一段能给观点。另外，有些语法错误。
作者: jbnmzcon 时间: 2012-2-25 07:49
Everybody has the right to choose living in a house or apartment CHINGLISH. Living in a house, indeed brings numerous amount of advantages indeed放最后比较好. The merits of living in an apartment, however, can not cannot 比较好 be ignored as well. This essay will argue that the merits and demerits of living in a house or a apartment depend on personal wealth and preference 为什么这么多同学都喜欢写 this essay will argue/discuss/elaborate xxxxx 呢. 这么写没有错，但是我相信考官一定已经看吐了。
作者: xianchengji 时间: 2012-2-25 16:38
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