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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?<br />
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Some people complain that every month they should allocate a part of their salary to pay the tax and there is not meaningful for themselves. Does it right? Of course, the tax is important to me, you and others, and it is one of the most vital factors of sustaining the modern society to go on. We should pay our tax to make our world better.<br />
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Can you image if there are no hospitals, schools, police station and governments? All chaos would arise, the children can not find anywhere to study, the patients can not find anywhere to see the doctors. The buses will not run along the street any more, the subways in the city are not available any longer. We citizen can not live even a day without public facilities. All these facilities need the tax to maintain them running normally. <br />
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The governments collect the taxes, and gather them together. The officials will act on a plan detailing how to use the tax properly, such as how much will be allocated into the public transportation, how much into medics or education. These taxes should be used to keep our modern lives much more comfortably and conveniently. <br />
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So, you can see the tax is very important for us all, and we should pay taxes from our salary. However, the governments must engage in how to measure the ratio of taxes reasonably, because some poor people should afford much less tax, even free, than the rich men.<br />
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我打算把练习作文陆续放上来，激励自己前进。这是第2篇：
Most children spend a lot of time watching TV shows and playing computer games. Should parents limit the time spent in front of the TV or PC for them? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, the children tend to spend more and more time on watching TV programs or playing PC games in their rooms rather than doing exercises outdoor or studying. I believe that their parents should teach them do not take too much time on the TV or PC, after all, these habits are bad for their health and study.
Indulging in watching TV or playing games will consume a great deal of time of children, thus, they do not have much time to communicate with their friends and parents. Gradually, they will become more isolated and stubborn . What is more, their eyesights will become weak and their bodies will become plump because of lack exercises.
There is an example about my younger nephew. He is 12 years old and he likes PC games very much and spend all his spare time on playing games. Once a new game's CD is released, he will buy it as soon as possible. He grasped 20 kinds of games and knew every details of these games. Fascinated by games, even in his classroom, he still researched the skills of the games in his booklets, regardless of teachers' talking. These games influence his study result greatly, he is hardly interested in studying and gets D at every exam.
All in all, spending too much their time on watching TV or playing games is bad to the children, parents should lead them to use their time properly which is good for them either physically or mentally.
作者: wandou333 时间: 2012-2-28 11:06
3. Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others,however,think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern society, pursuing the development of individual personalities results in diversities of thoughts to handle faires. Some people like a fixed work never changed, other active people tend to change his work frequently. I would like to believe that changes of their jobs certainly bring them more enthusiasm but the works should not be changed too often.
Normally, a cautious person likes to do the same thing all in his life, repeating the same thing everyday brings him the efficiency and the accuracy, he will be familiar with the procession very much and be aware every rules in detail, furthermore accumulate the rich experiences of his occupation. However we should also see that a long term repetitive working tend to be boring gradually to a person, with the increasing disappointment and dissatisfaction, he will be unhappy and lose the interesting for the job little by little.
On the contrary, change is a good thing sometimes, which brings people the fresh air like a gentle breeze and gives them the sunshine breaking through the dark of the emotions. Changing a job always arouses their enthusiasm hidden in ones' hearts too much longer. The lives return to be bright again, the people get an other chance to get more achievements. Of course, to be honest, changing too much or too often might influence the development of their careers, it is even bad for the professions, they can not accumulate their qualifications and not reach the higher platforms in your career lives.
Taking everything into considering, changing things in your lives is on some degrees good to you, but you should not change the things frequently too much, every 3 or 5 years is better, thus you can get continuous experiences that is important for your career and keep passion in your lives.
Some countries are providing general education in secondary schools, while others are teaching skills specific to a future career. Which type of education would be a better choice these days, in your opinion?
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4. With the development of economics and technology, the education increasingly play a key role of strategy in every country. Meanwhile, different countries have their own special understanding about how to carry on the education. Some believe that secondary schools should provide general education, others argue that skills teaching should be the prior task in secondary schools. However, in my views, both opinions have their merits on some degree.
General education gives secondary students opportunities to develop the abilities of studying widely so that the students can pursuit further higher education, such as undergraduate and graduate education, after they graduate from the secondary schools. Through these systematic trainings, they will be scientists, doctors, and senior engineers one day, and also benefit the economic constructing and science researching for their homeland.
At the same time, professional education of teaching special skills in middle schools helps students to grasp the techniques that are usefull in the future career. They can handle much more problems always seen in every day, for example, fixing cars, making delicious dishes and so on. After graduation and stepping into the society, they can be senior workers, cooker and other experts. With their help, the living level and the technology level will arose rapidly.
From the discussion above, it is not difficult to find that these two kinds of education benefit the social lives from different sides. Skills education would give the country more techenique's vigor as well as general education brings more economy and science's vitality, the country should pay the same attention on both of them.
5. Some people think that examinations have some bad effects on students. Some people say they have some good effects on education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, with the increasingly intense competition of society, the exam plays a more and more important role in education. A sizable percentage of people hold the view that exams have negative influence on students. Nevertheless, there are some other people who strongly insist that they bring benefits to education. Admittedly, both sides of the argument seem to be reasonable.
People who support that exams have disadvantages give some of the following reasons. First of all, the students receiving that education can only handle exams rather than reality affairs. Secondly, exams focus on competitions but ignore the teamwork, which is the spirit to success. Finally, much more examinations will take ones a lot of time so that students have not enough time to do more interesting and creative things.
On the other hand, some other persons strongly despise the above attitude. In their opinions, the exam have positive effects on education. For one thing, exams can test the studing result of students, which helps teachers to adjust course plans and teaching methods. For another, the student who want their hard work to be confirmed will get feedbacks in time by means of exams. In addition, If he gets a high score, it will inspire him to study harder and harder with full of self-confidence, which create a virtuous cycle.
Based on the discussion and analysis above, it cannot be denied that the benefits of examinations outweigh the disadvantages. So, I firmly think that we should take the exam in education, meanwhile, we also should be avoid of too much of it, because abused exams maybe exhaust the energy and interests of students.
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作者: wandou333 时间: 2012-3-1 03:43
6. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
With the increasingly rapid development of economy in many countries, our children living conditions have experienced a major breakthrough. However, children education do not keep pace with the times, more and more serious problems of children are brought to our attention in regards with education. These children's behaviour tend to a vexed and mental issue for their school. What factors result in that phenomenon and how we can deal with it have become a concern to our schools, especially to our society.
From my own perspective, there are many kinds of reasons should be taken into consideration. The main reason is that there are a large number of families have only one child especially in China. For these parents, the child is their princess or prince, they always spoil their children and satisfy any requirement they demand despite of whether the require is reasonable. Another reason is the environment of our society. Nowadays, things change quickly, there are much more porns and incidents of violence flooding in children's surrounding. That things have extremely negative effects on our children. In result, after the children go to school, they may behave abnormally, which becomes the headache of the school.
According to the reasons above, we should develop workable plans to address that issue. I think that there are two ways to run. Firstly, the parents should take more responsibilities, example is better than precept, they must set a good example for their children and tell them what characters they should have -- intelligence, courage and compassion. Secondly, by using all kinds of medium, such as radio, TV and brochure, the government and schools should establish a good environment in society, oppose and eliminate legal violations.
Although the student problem is a complicated issue with multiple causes, I believe that it can be eventually resolved by the joint efforts from parents, schools and the government.