关于表达的内容，虽然按照官方的说法，考生的观点不影响成绩，但是要注意的是1.不要千篇一律2.态度积极向上一点。考官是人，评分是带有主观因素的。比如说一鸭的时候，part two要求describe a TV program you do not like.当时我想起了西藏的骚乱和BBC扭曲事实的报道，回应道：我不喜欢的电视节目是BBC NEWS…很明显，坐在我对面的考官，一个年轻小伙，听得目瞪口呆，可能还没人在他面前挑战过BBC。我在说的过程中，他就一直呆坐在那里陷入沉思。考试结束后，他站起来拍了拍我的肩膀说：我同意的所说的，因为我在中国也生活了很多年。那次一鸭口语7.5.这应该可以作为避免千篇一律的例子吧。
Meeting someone for the first time through the internet is never a good idea. Do you agree?
It is manifestly clear that we are facing an increasing reliance on the internet. People try to meet friends through it even if they have never met each other before. Such trend, admittedly, produces problems to some extent, but is quite valuable for us, since it adds to the efficiency of communication.
Establishing contacts via the internet has the reputation of being dangerous, uncertain and unsafe. The chief problem is that you have little idea about who is sitting in front of the screen on the other end of the web: is it a criminal wanted, or a cold-blooded outlaw. Through the messages being exchanged, you can by no means assure their validity and certainty. In this case, how can we build trust with the chatting mate via cyberspace? So it seems the internet may be far from a wise choice to set-up personal links.
This opinion, however, does not survive the experiences in which trust has already been built in advance. That particularly applies to the daily work in a company, especially an international one. It is not necessary for an employee newly joining to get familiar with all the staff before embarking on work. But as the colleagues come from the same corporation, they are trusted correspondingly as a result, so that confidential information can be transferred without any barrier.
Granted, even under such circumstance, leakage of information and pirating are inevitable if some employees commit crimes against the company. But this only happens rarely if sufficient protecting regulations have been applied.
In conclusion, whether meeting someone new through the internet is a good approach depends on the level of trust. Without something of this kind, communication of any kind will be by no means fruitful. The implications of all this is that it is not the means of communication that matters, but the establishment of trust.
It is manifestly clear that we are facing an increasing reliance on the internet. People try to meet friends through it even if they have never met each other before. Such trend, admittedly, produces problems to some extent, but is quite valuable for us, since it adds to the efficiency of communication.
请教一下楼主，上面句子里面but是连词用还是作副词用？
作连词用，是不是后面缺个主语it啊？
在研究楼主大人的大作，百思不得其解啊，网上也没找到类似的例子。
楼主的句子写得很绚丽啊
作者: jcpcftpp29 时间: 2012-7-20 11:17
it省略了。类似的句子有：He does not have a rich father, but depends on himself.
绚丽与否就不知道了，写出自己的风格就好。
再给个例子，本人的一篇习作，希望能帮到你。
The table below shows the percentage of Australian households with access to computers or internet from 1998 to 2000.
Summarize the information by choosing and identifying the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data indicates how the ratio of Australian families who had access to computer and internet changed from 1998 to 2000. A comparison was made between households with lower income (below $50,000 per year) and those with higher income (above $50,000 each year).
It is manifestly clear from the data that throughout the given period, more Australian households could use personal computer and the internet, regardless of the level of their income. In 1998, only 34% of impoverished families and 69% of affluent ones could access to the computer, which witnessed a 3% and 8% increase respectively two years later. Similarly, such a rise happened to the access to internet, but more significantly, with 100% and 50% increase recorded.
Interestingly, between the years 1998 and 1999, the percentage of families with computer access did not change considerably. It dropped by 1% for deprived families, and increased only by 2% for wealthy ones.
In conclusion, more families in Australia were able to use computer and internet from 1998 to 2000, no matter what the economic condition they were in. And it appeared that the growth of internet use outweighed that of the computer.