这验证码还带动画的，谁看了都得吐。。。
材料都是论坛里看来的
1.顾家北，手把手教你写作
2.顾老师，雅思写作套路与范例
3.小姨的真题与范文
4.刘洪波的最简化雅思写作
5.论坛网友yrqin自创的step by step剖析雅思写作
作者: 一车农民 时间: 2013-8-21 22:46
这两天忙着剖析写作能拿到7分的官方standard，找出自己不达标的项目，并提出解决方案。
Task Response 7.0
1. addresses all parts of the task
论证不能片面，正面，反面都要说，一边倒的结构只说一方面，而完全漏了反面的论证。
论证结构有三种，
一边倒，通常写5段，开头结尾，加三段理由，或者两段理由
2+1结构，也是5段，第二段承认对方观点，并反驳，第三，第四段写支持自己观点的理由
对称结构，一般4段，第二段写正面，第三段写反面，最后提出自己支持的观点
do you agree or disagree, what is your opinion，可以写一边倒
to what extent do you agree or disagree，需要用2+1
discuss both sides and give your opinion，需要用对称结构
综上，考虑到一边倒容易被判partially address the tasks，对于agree or disagree，推荐使用2+1结构。
2. presents a clear position throughout the response
相对较容易，开头明确提出观点，结尾重申，对称结构，可以最后一段提出自己的观点
3. presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus
论证有力支持论点，理由充分。避免牵强的理由，不符合逻辑的论证。
解决方案：学习范文，点评及经验帖
Coherence and Cohesion 7.0
1. logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
逻辑清晰，理由充分，对论点的论证是连贯的，虽然分了不同的段
解决方案：学习范文，点评及经验贴
2. uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
合理使用多种连接词，连接句子
解决方案：学习范文，积累同义连接词进行替换，或者其他高级连接词
3. presents a clear central topic within each paragraph
每段都有一个清晰的中心主题
Lexical Resource 7.0
1. uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
词汇丰富，用词准确
解决方案：积累高级词汇，积累同义词，可进行同义替换，体现了flexibility(灵活)，避免相同的意思只能用单一的词汇表达
Today, I finally, have finished reading and remembering all the words from《新东方雅思词汇》, altogether 4000+ words, 2000+ collected in my word brochure, which takes me 6 months since April.
This is my first time to complete a vocabulary book, which is even an e-book not a real book. I bought a lot of v books when I was a student. I even could not finish 'A' word part before. Today, I succeed.
Surely, I should be happy to achieve this feat, but I cannot. I feel it is still a long way to reach 7*4 after seeing so many failures and attempts made by other people.
Another bad news for ICT applicants, for State NT, I think they require job offer now for overseas ICT applicants. I guess this rule is added recently as I have traced the website for some time. So the last door is almost closed for 261313 applicants with 55 points and 4*6. I am sad. Now, only one way left
Nonetheless, my 4*7 life goes on. I cannot give up as I have already given up so many things for 4*7, even if I am tired, even if I need to take care of my daughter at mid-night, even if I need OT for my work.
Though target is still far away, at least I have a dream and fight for it.
Bad news is that I messed up in the test on Dec, 7th. I guess I even can not reach band 7 for ACADEMIC reading. I have changed all my following tests to GENERAL. Wish I could have a good luck.
2nd, academic result, L8, R7.5,W5.5,S6
I suspect they did adjustment for reading band, for example, 30 correct answers can get band 7.5. Reading on Dec 7th was far more difficult than the one on July, 27th. I finished the test on July,27th in 45 minutes. By contrast, I fought until the last minute on Dec 7th. I could not find direct answers for 10+ questions in the articles and just followed my feeling to answer them. At that time, I was desperate and thought I could get band 7 for reading.
After the attack in reading, I totally messed up in writing, so I deserve the band.
It is not surprising to get band 6 again for speaking as I spent less time on it.
Nevertheless, life goes on and I'd say good-bye to A test. I will take G test from January. Wish I would have a better luck.
Effective 24 December 2013, applications for NSW nomination for the subclass 190 visa will close. Applications received after this date will not be processed or returned. NSW will reopen for the subclass 190 visa nomination in July 2014.
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