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发表于 2010-5-5 22:36:15
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来自： INNA
重写第一段：
Nowadays, along with the improvement of living standards, there are many changes in eating habits. More and more people, particularly children, prefer eating some food with an imbalaned nutrition such as fast-food, even junk food. A balanced diet, as far as I am concerned, still plays a quite important role for people to have a good life.
第二段的改写如下：
Obviously, eating balanced meals can ensure individuals to obtain all the nutrients in the right proportion. Different types of food provide different nutrients and therefore it is impossible to take all the necessary nutrition for a good health or growth from only one type of food. For instance, fruits and vegetables contain plenty of vitamins, while meats produce more fat and protein. As a result, not only should children eat with a varied food containing vegetables and meats during the whole period of their growth, the adults should also ensure the daily intake of nutrition by eating a quite traditional food. Only in this way could people keep fit so as to make their lives happier.
请大家再给看看，感觉各位同学的指导，比我自已闷头学几天收获还要多。
再次感谢楼上的几位！
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发表于 2010-5-5 15:01:35
