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夏雨秋露 · 发表于 2010-3-24 22:44:06

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没有题目就是自己写写的，恳请各位给点意见，文章很多chinglish的地方就是不知道怎么表达好。

Enviromental problems are becoming more and more serious in all parts of the globe.Nowadays we usually listen to many news about natural disasters such as sandstorm, mudflow, drought and so on. How about our enviroment? Why does it become so bad?

Enviromental problems are global problem which we should concentrated on.Nowadays we often hear the words “sandstorm，mudflow and drought”from the news which we seldom heard before。

Although these disasters are acted naturally, I also think there must be something about humans. In recent years, accompany with the rapid development of enconomy, people do make many harmful effects to the nature which people and all the life form are depending on.For example, people cut down and kill off trees,waster water is being poured into rivers every day as well as poisonous gas which made by morden machine is being giving off. The airis unhealthy for people to breathe. Furthermore, wherever you go, you can find the rubbish. How terrible these pollutions are.

We should admit that all of the phenomena should have connection with human beings behaviors. With the development of economy, we do make many harmful effects on our eviroment which all the lives are depending on. On the other hand,the result of deforestation will cause the appearance of deserts.Waste water and poisonous gas having been given off everyday. As a result,the air is not good to breathe and the water is unhealthy to drink. Furthermore, our life is filled with rubbish. How terrible these pollutions are.

Let's protect our enviroment right now.Stop doing anything that is harmful to our setting and ourselves. Please take care of the in-dangered animals. There is the only globe that we can live in the universe. Most impotantly, legislation must be eatablished to punish those who are involved in the destructive conducts.

I wish we could own a fresh and clean sky in the not distant future.

红色部分是我请一个同事改的，不知是不是还有值得改的地方，

有个句子，我们想了好久，“日益减少的森林会导致沙漠的越来越到。”

请大虾来指导指导。

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uwtwmtdy · 发表于 2010-3-28 08:16:56

(This is as far as I can help you...)

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious in many parts of the globe. Nowadays we usually listen to the news about natural disasters such as sandstorm, mudflow, drought and so on. What happened to our environment? Why has it become so bad?

Although these disasters happen naturally, I believe human activities might also be a relevant factor. Due to the rapid economic development, human beings have caused a lot of harm to the nature which every living creature depends on. For example, trees are cut down, water is wasted and poured to the river and poison gas is created by the industry. The air becomes polluted and is unhealthy to breathe. Furthermore, the pollution is so severe that you can find rubbish everywhere.

Let us begin to protect our environment right now. We should stop doing anything that is harmful to our nature and protect the endangered species. This is the only globe that we can live in. Most importantly, legislation must be introduced to punish those involved with destructive acts to the environment.

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