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qqbja51086

Some people say that children should learn second language as early as possible. Do you agree?（4月17日G类作文预测）

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During the international economic cooperation of 21th centuries, the demand of higher foreign language ability is rising rapidly. Despite the frequently communication worldwide, people still suffers from language barriers. Some figure out that kids should learn more than one kind of language as early as they begin to learn speaking. I agree with this opinion up to a point.



Obviously, the language education today is falling behind in efforts to meet requirements. However, a person who has learnt two languages at the very beginning could be better prepared for modern society, because of their outstanding multiple language skills. In the first place, the learning speed of children is far more quickly than adults, especially in language. This phenomenon can be partly attributed to the studying methods, while baby can take it easily in their own way which is a born talent. Next, if kids acquire two kinds of tongues, they may think as well as talk in both of them. They will become native speakers in these two languages. Furthermore, they can use these skills in many situations. For instance, someone who speaks both English and Chinese can survive in majority countries.



At the mean time, it comes with strong opposition from others who argue that we are suppose to give our children a delightful childhood, we should not force them to learn such things. I think it is a duty to make our children adapt for the social needs. Unfortunately, lots of children in my country never access a foreign language, and even do not mention to use it. They just lose the chance to see the whole world.



As a conclusion, to learn second language as early as possible can bring great benefits to our children. We should provide more opportunities for them to join these foreign language surroundings.

qqbja51086

恩，短时间内要实际提高英语水平是不太可能的，现在都是为了应付考试指标不治本的方法
你指出的几个问题我会注意的。

ywqhua3153

你的文章看上去很规整，不知道手写起来会不会也能有这种感觉，但是仔细看下来，感觉有些飘忽，你可以买一本胡敏的雅思高分作文，想得高分，确实还得下狠功夫，前提是通篇不要让考官找到明显的语法错误，什么单复数啊，副词，形容词啊的正确使用。根据你的语法现状，我建议从短句练起，而且词组搭配也要多练，多看看英文报刊，一些固定搭配自然就记住了。这个没办法，放下的时间长了，捡起来就不那么容易，但是既然决定到澳洲来，英语的提高势在必行。

qqbja51086

呵呵，可见我犯了很多语法错误和用词不准确的错误哦。
最后一句意思是会英语和中文的人去大多数国家交流都没有问题，只是表达得不好，变成suvive了，呵呵

ptdf7x4y9

foreign language ability？没见过这么用的，这类能力都叫skill吧？

the frequently communication，明明需要修饰的是名词communication,为什么要用副词，应该用形容词修饰名词。

people still suffers....不应该就第三人称单数，这里是复数名词，东西用原型

that kids should，kids是很口语的用法，就是小屁孩的意思，用children更恰当


For instance, someone who speaks both English and Chinese can survive in majority countries这个结论没什么道理吧，能讲2种语言就能在大多数国家survive了？不见得吧？能讲2种语言的乞丐我可见过一些。

qqbja51086

果然换种思路感觉完全不一样

qqbja51086

你用词和语句组织比我好多了...这个不是一蹴而就的
水平只有这点点嘛，呵呵

qqbja51086

帮我找出好些语法错误哦，谢谢你啦

qqbja51086

恩，感觉我思路混乱...时态语态错误很多...回去加紧练习

孙亚芳姐姐

Entering into the 21st century, the relationship between countries is becoming closer than ever before, so the demand of bilinguist is rising rapidly. Some figure out children should learn two or more languages as early as they can. I think that children would benefit from this if they try to learn foreign languages at an early age.

Obviously, there are some positive factors for children to grasp a foreign language. In the first place, most children have better memory than adults and this is the key factor when it comes to learning a foreign language. As a result, the learning speed of children is faster than that of adults. Next, kids have plenty of time for practicing foreign language while adults have to spend more time on working and other social stuff. Once a child becomes an adult, he or she surely can hardly spend so adequate time on studying. From our own life experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support this point. Furthermore, more and more electronic educational equipments and computer software appear nowadays, and it makes easy for children to learn foreign languages by teaching themselves instead of inviting teachers.

However, some argue that we should not force them to learn foreign languages too early and children should have a delightful childhood. In my opinion, it is parents’ duty to tell children that this is the best time for them to be a bilinguist who will not suffer from language barriers after growing up. Unfortunately, some children in my country never touch with a foreign language, not even using it, because nobody told them to do so. They just lose the best chance to learn other languages.

As a conclusion, learning a foreign language as early as possible can bring great benefit to our children. We should provide more opportunities for them to enjoy the fun of speaking a foreign language.

很抱歉没有用修订，太麻烦了。
不当之处，请指正。