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剑四小作文 - 2 卖家俱
题目：
You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you are selling
describe the furniture
suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furture
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练了两天小作文，感觉进步了一些。但是今天帮主申批这篇作文还是吓死了，写得巨直白，纯口语化，很中文。经过修改，这已经是我尽最大努力把它变得稍微不那么口语化了。请大家打分吧。
如果能得到认同，我们就要move forward，开始练大作文了。毕竟时间很有限了。
目标 6
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以下，已经根据3WU同学的comments 改进。多谢
Dear Jackson,
I am writing to see if you would like to buy my compute desk, which was bought from IKEA two months ago. I will leave Shanghai in few weeks. It is inconvience and expensive to take furniture with me. Therefore, I decide to hold a garage sell this Sunday. Among the furniture there is a computer desk which I believe you might like to keep.
The computer desk is still in perfect condition. As you may have seen from IKEA advertisement, the compute desk has a wooden desktop with stainless steel legs and a file cabinet. The desktop is 2 meters long and 0.6 meter wide, which makes it big enough to accommodate[抄来了，但是还是觉得不大会用这个词] a LCD/CRT monitor and daily files. Its height is adjustable from 0.7 meter to 0.9 meter. I have always been carefully using this computer desk. I think you would like it once you see it.
You are welcome to come for an inspection before the garage sale. Saturday would be fine for me. I bought the computer desk for $150. However, you can take it for $60. I am Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Joe Johns
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发表于 2010-8-8 04:39:32
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