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康熙邓

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.



Nowadays, many people have changed their old conception of working. They will never spend their lives doing the same things while others still keep no change. In my opinion, change is a good thing but it is not suitable for everyone.



On the one side, people can get benefits from changing their jobs. Firstly, searching for a new job can earn more money. People always pursue wealth which is their first target for working. According to a survey, 90 percent of people who want to change their occupation are not satisfied with current salary. Secondly, people will be lazy if they keep stay in a same place. A new environment will encourage them to express their potential ability. Last but not least, new working opportunity enable employees to study new technology to enrich their knowledge which will promote the skill level of the workers.



On the other side, people should not change their job indiscriminately because they should consider some issues. In the first place, people need to get accustomed to a new system which means new employee to the new company. No one in the company will treat you as professional worker as before. In their eyes, you just a new colleague who can be commanded by anyone. In the second place, if you are a frequent job-hopping, the company will suspicious your loyalty and integrity. For instance, if a candidate have never worked for a company more than one year, definitely, the interviewer of the new company will refuse your application. Finally, people should consider more about job changing  especially if they have married. Although money is important, stable of life is more significant. Changing a job means a challenge, it may be failed. At that time, the whole family will tied by the pressure of unemployment. That is why people really should consider carefully about this thing.



All in all, every coin has two sides. Even though changing a job will encounter some risks, people will be gain more through job-hopping if they can make a serious consideration before they make decisions.



最近写作文 发现2个大问题  

1.  不会造句，很奇怪 许多句子或者单词等到写作文的时候 怎么也想不出来

2.  字数太多  动不动就奔300+去了  



各位水友猛拍~

loagpodaeg

学习.

且行行

我也有自己的模板...虽然还是很容易看出模板的痕迹，但是稍微有点心意
建议楼主也准备准备...现用的这个模板太老了

南国有佳任倾城

我讲下我的方法，见笑了啊
对于6分或6分以下的水平（例如我）一定要自己写一个模板，我自己有一个，个人认为是独一无二的，语法、句式比较有多样性。确定了以后，考试前我至少写了十篇文章，每篇都是用这个模板，考出来了6分，比前两次都高（1st 5、2nd 5.5）。我觉得想短时间提高的话，这个方法还是比较有效的，至少对我而言。这种做法节省开头、结尾的时间，大部分时间都可以用来思考主体论点、论据。而且很少被认为是抄袭（其实是抄自己的，呵呵）
除了模板外还有个建议就是尽量多写，由于平时自己练习时比较注意这方面，即使考试时间不够（我小作文练的少，考试时用了30分钟），我也在30分钟内完成了300字，其实我自我感觉写的很差，但是能得6，我觉得字数有很大关系。个人观点、仅供参考。

sd76hujoyc

大牛们的点评，好好学习学习。

Nawncreesse

改个introduction 试试。
Recent years have been witnessing a multitude of changes which come from societies and technologies, affect  us in every walk of life.  However, many argue whether we should accept them or merely avoid. In my opinion,  accepting and overcoming these challenges would finally keep you from backing a loser.

天生小小小虫

刚好练习的作文和楼主同样题目。也放上来，求大家狠批！

Since the dawn of the 21st century, we human beings are experiencing various changes, social and technological, in every aspect of our lives. However, the debate over the pros and cons of changes is still representative of the type of questions raised regarding how changes may affect people and modern society. Though some people avoid changes and try to live a routine life, I believe the positive effects of changes far outweigh its negative ones.
Convincing argument can be made that we can benefit a lot from changes. First, changes are inevitable and necessary for social revolutions and evolutions of human beings. If our ancestors had not changed their hunting lifestyle and not settled down to farm, we would probably still live in caves. If the British in the 1860s had not embraced changes and made the 1st step of industrial revolution, mass production would still be a dream today. If cars and aero planes had not been invented, we perhaps would never be able to imagine how things were like on the other side of the planet, let alone globalization. Such instances can be countless.
Moreover, changes can bring about opportunities.  In history every social change was followed by new job vacancies and new professions.  It is only possible for people who can take the chance to improve their living conditions or achieve their ultimate goals. Take the CEO of Apple for example. If Steve Jobs had never dropped out from college and taken the first bite off the apple, he would probably just be an ordinary person instead of one of the most successful businessmen and legendary icons. Also, changes can afford us with amusements and keep us from getting bored. For people living everyday life like a routine transaction, the enthusiasm and passion inside them would soon die out, or even never exist, which might lead to serious psychological problems such as depression.
Granted, changes may carry some risks, since there are good changes and bad ones too, like natural catastrophes and financial crisis. Some argue that people might lose their jobs or even their lives due to those evil changes. However, with modern technology we are increasingly better able to cope with those kinds of problems.
To conclude, even though sometimes changes may have negative influences on people and the society, some of which cannot be neglected, I still believe that their positive effects are more noteworthy.

hunjiesuohrb.cn

写议论文，建议读读原版托马斯潘恩的常识，不需要写出那样高档的文字，但是真的对思路启发很大。

4p9e3043

不晓得是不是与厌烦武术套路表演同理，我觉得这样的文章套路看得好乏味。

uybripe59

我也感觉偏题了，如果要写change job, 也应该先把题中的change释义一下，在众多的change中选用job来展开，这样才勉强可以，不过有被考官认为套题的嫌疑，到6是有难度的。
这个题比较大，其实不太好写。当然，对于语言功底好的，发挥空间更大，建议LZ再构思下，还是值得的。