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Some people say that students should work or travel a period of time before they go to the university. To what extent do agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, more and more students choose a gap year to find job or go travelling before they go to university. Some people blame that gap year may has negative effects to students. However, I cannot agree with their thought. On the contrary, I believe that gap year can help students to learn a lot of things, which they cannot learn from university.
The advantages of gap year is obviously. In the first place, students can clearly know what they want to study in university through their own experiences in gap year. This is much better than they study without any target. In the second place, students will learn their major lesson more quickly if they have working experience in such factory. The knowledge in the book is just theory, which should combined with practical ability. For instance, if a student work for a car manufactory, he will get a good score in engine design. Finally, gap year will make youths more independent and mature. Gap year can let students know the society is so competitive that they should never treated themselves as children and no one will help you in such stressful circumstance. Therefor, who can deny the benefits of gap year ?
Admittedly, gap year is not suitable for all students. Some person worry about that students cannot resistant the bad influence because of their curiosity. However, it is not realistic that we do not support gap year according to these small drawbacks. If the students can be well guided by their parents and peers, I believe gap year will play a key role in students' education.
In conclusion, although some students may lost themselves because of gap year, I still believe that most students can get benefits from gap year. When students go back to university, they will find themselves totally different from they used to be. Yes, more confident and mature.
话题相对 简单 但是 我还有有几个问题
首先 我的字数 还是有问题 我刻意控制了 还是写了340+ 而且 我是在考卷纸上直接练习的 花了30分钟不到就写完了
其次 在我打字上网的时候 我做了点修改 考场里面的话 我肯定不可能那么大的改动了 。。 这个我很担心
希望各位猛拍～ 不求最猛 但求更猛，人生攻击尤佳 ～
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In contemporary society, more and more students choose to find a job or go travelling before they go to university. Some people blame that it may has negative effects to students. However, I cannot agree with them. On the contrary, I believe that working or traveling can help students to learn a lot of things, which they cannot learn from university.
Students can gain more money and experiences through working. Both part time job and full time job can provide students money and experiences. Students can use these money to buy books, stationary even car as preparation for their further study. More importantly, students' ability of tackle problems will be enhanced, which is very useful for students.
After a long time study in school, many youths need to relax. Traveling is a good way to relax students' bodies and ease their minds, furthermore it can broaden their horizons. According to a survey, 70 percents high school students in China have never been to other places. This phenomenon is so ironic. Students can learn the different cultural and customs, which enrich their knowledge.
Admittedly, students may develop some bad habits such as smoking, drinking and even drug addiction because of their ignorance and curiosity. When students working or traveling, many temptations waiting for them. However, if parents can give their children the good guidance, we can avoid students cultivating bad behavior.
In conclusion, although some students may lost themselves because their poor ability of self-control, I believe most of students can get benefits from working or traveling before they go to university.
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发表于 2010-9-8 16:27:55
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