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somepeople think that it is more important for a single language as aninternational offical language. others think that it will make itdifficult to identify countries and loss culture. what's your opinion?and show your reason and example .

有一些人认为选一种单一的语言作为国际通用的官方语言很重要,有的人认为很难让这么多国家统一语言,而且还会导致文化流失。你的观点是什么,表明自己的观点,并举例子。







Nowdays,the contacts among countries become more and more frequently andcommonly, it says that the whole world has become a small village. Atthe processing of globalization, language really plays an importantrole which affect the mutual understand of people who are different innationalities, skin colour, race, religion, social philosophy and soon. As countries interact intensely with one and another, the work ofmaintaining every countries original civilization is of greatimportance.



Asfar as I am concerned, I prefer diversify cultures existing together inthe international affairs to a single language separately being anglobal official language. It is really tough to pick up one that suitsto be the international language from hundreds and thousands oflanguages. Some people may argue that English is the perfect choice,for it is the most widely used arround the world. From this point ofview, Chinese is a better choice than English, because there are morethan 1.3 billion people making Chinese as their first language, whichaccount 1/5 of the world population. There are also other languagesused by relatively less people in various small countries, all thelanguages are organic part of their conventional culture which handedby generations and generations. Furthermore, there are more dif!ficulties to promote the uniform language through the whole earth, andobviously there is no need to do so.



Languagesare a typical representative of different national cultures, it is thedistinctiveness of various cultures that make the world morediversified. As for the international communication, each countryshould keep their own languages, the most practicable way is tocultivate the language experts that can be proficient both in his ownlanguage and other foreign languages. Definitly, it is easier tocultivate language experts than to identify all the countries with onelanguage.



Allin all, there is no need to make a single language as an internationalofficial language, and respect the diversity of each countriesconventional culture can make our world more colorful and interesting.



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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-19 05:18:28 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA




现在人员基本满了,呵呵,不过还需要和我一样打杂的,不要小看打杂的,可以和3wu免费学英語


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发表于 2010-9-19 02:39:48 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA





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发表于 2010-9-18 18:07:47 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA




冲3WU老师严谨治学严厉打分的态度进来膜拜的


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发表于 2010-9-18 11:10:16 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


离题作文。我不知道怎么打分合适。给5吧。


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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-18 08:12:56 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA




你感觉第二个作文能得个几分来着?我的要求不高,6分就好了,哈哈


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发表于 2010-9-18 01:35:46 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


3无看来作文很好啊


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嗯。。给你个建议。  只用名词 (记得词性,中英文皆可), 把题目 立意 列出来。 给出 3个相关观点 (记住是名词)。 每个 观点给出 支持的理由 (注意是 支持的,名词或词组)。

列完以后回头看看  这几个名词是否有紧密的关系。然后再准备如何用这些已列出名词。

希望这样可以帮你防止偏题。


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发表于 2010-9-17 11:26:23 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA



  

开学堂。。。呵呵。。不敢当。。。切磋切磋而已。。。倒是 Xavy  开了会计师事务所 可要给咱家兄弟姐妹一点折扣。。。呵呵。


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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-16 23:53:01 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA




3WU的点评确实管用,我也发现我自己需要多加练习啊,可是时间不等人呐,呵呵~。按你的意思重写了一下,不知道看起来好点没。至于money,我会多挣点,然后分你们一点啊,现在只能表示感謝了,呵呵

English, as one of designated international language becomes popular more and more since last century, and the heated argument behind the trend has been existing for several decades. Some people warm that uniformed international language will make it hard to identify countries and lose culture, but others persist in the importance introduced by single official language globally. Personally, I am more declined to the later one.

As relative statistics indicates, millions of dollars are spent on language translations. In order for smooth communications among those who have different languages, transformation to intermediate one becomes the ultimate barrier, and normally the third parties and agents are invited to eliminate that with huge pay. At the meanwhile, this decreases the effectiveness of the communication process. Moreover, misunderstandings, or even conflicts are produced when two peers are expressing their own comments using the the languages of themselves sometimes, thereby unexpected results make them feel puzzled. Last but not least, people is spending more time t to learn international languages like English than ever for self-expressing in front of foreigners. With uniformed international language, people need not spend time on obsolete ones, the money paid to the 3rd parties and agents is unnecessary, productive communication can be achieved obviously, and misunderstandings can be eliminated as well.

It is not denied that identifying countries becomes difficult, and culture loss with single international official language. The nature of each particular language is uniqueness. What is meant by this is that language is the one of the common symbols for those who have same language, and it should be identification to judge which country the language owner is from. That one language is different from another one, and the differentiated feature should be part of the national cultures.

In conclusion, the importance of adapting single international official language becomes obvious with rapid pace of globalization, and I believe uniformed language will be more beneficial to overall society, even it will introduce minor problems like culture loss.


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