死了死了……作文时间不够用啊……

4de5x1xd5

周末就要考人生第一鸭了。之前一直在拼口语，看了些教程和范文觉得只要掌握结构作文应该不难，所以最近才开始试水作文。没想到真是太小瞧作文了……40分钟顶多能写一半……感觉就是没话可写，开头凑合凑合还能整出来，第二段写到一般或者结尾的时候就要卡壳了，更不要说接下来还有第三段……最后的结尾更痛苦，怎么着都会和第一段用词有重复。天哪……死定了呀……



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fpech037

http://bbs.3gbbs.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=4&ID=242627

3g网12/4日考试的预测，听力连续8次100%中，希望对楼主有用。

mv0p5c2f8

谢谢楼上的评价，可惜今天分都评完了，不能给你加分。
唉，这个语法现在也很困扰我，只能多看看范文和阅读找自己的毛病了。

清澈海洋

Answer:

In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. ....

There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.

So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.

In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status

第一次看别人的作文，不说结构，用词，内容，纯粹基本语法错误....

圈圈的圈圈

In these day and age,????
There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. 不应该用respects.
For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc 有名词，形容词。应该是同一属性。

cbiem0l3l8

刚写了一篇预测的作文，真TMD难，正面理由一堆，反面怎么都想不出来，但题目必须 Discuss both views ，这次超时了，花了一个多小时才写完，知道你急着考试，发上来咱们共勉吧。

1  Some people think the government should pay for citizens’health care and education while others argue that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer:

In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. Some people think that government should be accountable for paying for that but the others do not think so. This essey will discuss both sides in this debate.

There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.

So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.

In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status.

桃叶何渡

一天一篇大+小足够了，一周时间足够了。
字数别太多也别太少，逻辑干净简单一些，复杂了老外看不懂的。这个针对6分来说的。。。
审题一定要仔细，千万别跑题，紧扣主题。

1周的时间，方法正确，可以练到6分水平的。

祝好运拉。

ouumbmmsu84

我老公也在苦练作文啊

星GUANG

真的哦，昨天还看了还没出，今天刚出来。12月口语和写作预测。
http://blog.sina.com.cn/ieltsguru

4de5x1xd5

嗯，我也是想练习就练押题的题目，这样既做了练习又做了考试准备。再次感谢大家的建议，真是太有帮助了

to 10楼，对阁下的观点本人深有同感，要是你猜对了给你加分，哈哈