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You have just obtained a new job. However, you are unable to get to work on time. Write a letter to your boss, explaining the situation and asking whether there is possibility of your starting work the other day.



Dear Mr. Smith,

        I am a new employee who just gets the offer a weeks ago. According to the plan, I will be there for working on next Wednesday. But something has happened to me and I am sorry to request a delay for my starting work.

        I am so grateful for getting a job from your company and ready to work with full energy and heart. But something interrupted my schedule abruptly, that is my landlord's daughter will be here from America on Friday, and I have to move out, otherwise there will be no other rooms for her. So I have to spend several days to find a new place before her arrival. Thus I think it will be impossible for my to begin my work at the right time. I do not know if it is possible for me to delay my staring , though I do hope you can give me the chance to postpone my starting for one week.

        I will be very appreciated if you can kindly consider my request and give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,



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发表于 2011-3-14 04:53:28 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


lz好牛b的签名


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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 23:08:30 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


Task1: Write a letter to the boss of a restaurant to reserve a room for a friend to celebrate his birthday. The letter should include the reason to write the letter, the requirement of flat and your specific service.
Dear Madam or Sir,
        I am writing you to inquire whether there are any rooms and services available for us to have a birthday party.
        We are expecting to hold a birthday party for a friend from 7 pm to 12 pm at next Saturday night. Because your restaurant is famous for its excellent services and delicious foods, it will be an unforgettable birthday to my friend if we can celebrate the party in such restaurant. We need a large exclusive room which can accommodate all our friends with an attendance of about 12 persons. It would be much better if the room is equipped with singing and dancing facilities. Before making a reservation, we hope we can review your menu to pick up some suitable courses in advance for our special stomach. If possible, we want to bring drinks by ourselves for they are special and can't be bought from the local.
        It will be appreciated if you can send me your menu and quotation. I am looking forward to receiving a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.


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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 18:39:24 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


Task 1: Write a letter to apply for a position in a local department store. In the description you should include the following items: 1) what is the position? 2) your experience and related ability.
Dear Madam or Sir,
        I am very interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining the position of sales manager advertised in the Daily Newspaper by your department store.
        I have been working as a sales manager in Marry Mall which is a well-known mall of Beijing for more than 6years from 2005. My responsibilities in the mall included making sales plans, managing salesmen and customers relationship effectively. Under my leadership, our sales team won the Annual Best Sales Champion title 5 times in the last 6 years, though it had never got the title before I took over the position. I noticed the position you offered is really like the position that I held in the Marry Mall. Despite that I think it will be more challenging, I am all ready for that.
        Thank you for your attention and it will be appreciated if you can give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience or a chance to have a conversation with you.


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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 17:44:09 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


Task 1: Write a reference letter for your friend to work with foreign teenagers. Describe his or her character and why you recommend him or her. 
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Dear Madam or Sir,
                I am a friend of Mike and we have known one another for more than 10 years. Regarding his excellent ability of getting along with adolescents and fluent English, I think he is a suitable candidate for work like that.
                Since graduating from teaching college, Mike have been working as a English teacher in the local high school - Zhaoyi High School for 5 years. Because of his hard working and patience with others, he won the Most Respectable Teacher title which resulted from the voting of students and the staff' 5 times. That made him the first teacher who got the title every year in that school. He also worked as an exchange teacher in South Africa for 3 months last year. I think if he can have a chance to work with foreign teenagers, he will behave wonderfully without letting them down.
                Thank you for your attention. If you have any inquiries about the letter, feel free to contact me at [email protected] or (086)12345678901 please.
Yours sincerely,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 16:25:38 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


2009年11月7日雅思机经G类,G类写作TASK1 你借了你朋友一件东西去参加PARTY,但是把东西搞坏了。现在写封信去道歉,然后说明你是怎么弄坏它的。你准备怎么做?
Dear John,
        I am sorry to say that I have made a stupid mistake that your car was crashed on my way home after the party.
        Leaving from the party on Wednesday night, I drove your car carefully and slowly with my friends. When we stopped to wait  to pass some intersection in the front of the red light, a car behind us rushed to the right quickly and hit your car heavily. Before we can stop that car, it was far away where we can get. The left front light of your car is broken and out of working. Now I have put it in a repairing shop to wait for fixing, the staff tell me that they don't have any backup lights at present, so I have to postpone returning the car to you for more 3 days before it was fixed.
        Again , I am really sorry for making your car broken. Forgive me for what I have done to you please.
Your sincerely,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 14:24:15 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


You live on a beautiful island. Now write a letter to friend to invite him to pay a visit. You should describe the beautiful things worth seeing on the island.
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Dear John,
        I am writing you to invite you to have a trip to the island I live on for I do want to share something with you.
        If I do not tell you something about the island, maybe you can hardly imagine how beautiful the place is. The island is the result of a volcano erupting happened thousands of years ago and just has been cultivated no more than 200 years, so there are few human marks which can be commonly seen in other places. The crystal clean water, the cute turtles and the colorful corals, even the eruption, will impress you and leave you a wonderful and unforgettable vacation if you can take several days to have a visiting. I really hope that you can visit the island and I will prepare everything for you before you arrive.
         Just plan the schedule please and I am waiting for you here. It will be my pleasure to see you on the island.
Yours sincerely,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-13 09:28:16 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


我看的是网上下载的资料(里面的页眉写着By Tony Sun 孙肇春),实在是舍不得花钱报名参加培训,嘿嘿嘿。




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发表于 2011-3-13 07:43:20 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


不好意思,今天有活了,不能改啦


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发表于 2011-3-12 20:22:32 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


BTW, 你也是在看环球雅思的培训资料吧,嘿嘿


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