多次作文不过6，再考的机会不多了，放上最新的作文求拍砖

楚缘比

由于工作的关系，再考雅思的机会不多了

多次作文不过6，请各位拍砖，非常感谢

而且目前我是先写大作文，但是大作文的时间会超过40分钟，小作文的时间有点不够

请问大家在考场上是如何分配时间的



作文题：Some people think that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Others think that students of different abilities should be taught together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.



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One feature of modern educational system is to respect students’ personalities and cultivate them by encouraging them to develop their own advantages. As a consequence, it seems that different children need various educations. However, I believe we shall not teach students with high intelligent separately from the others. There are quite a few advantages to have all children of all kind of talents study together.



A good reason for teaching all children in one group would be that a human can never live along in modern society. Human being has developed a system of communication and diverse productions to fulfill the personal needs. One who be separated from other people and be taught in a small group of students is more likely lack of skills to deal with their circumstance.



In addition, children need to contact with different kinds of people thus to from a right attitude of life and the world. They shall aware of that they are unique from others while everyone has their own gifts. Such a surrounding that they are taught in, will make them learn to show respect to other people and learn the spirits of teamwork and cooperation. What is more, children would have more fun to play in a team with different type of young people rather that a team full of same sorts of pupils.



However, it is true that a class with students of same gifts will be much efficient to teach, and they will obviously get the most suitable conditions which may help these students succeed. But in my view, this kind of successes are results of losing happiness with different classmates and likely to be bad for children’s personalities.



In conclusion, to collect all the same ability students in a class has its own advantage, but the losing is unbearable for a child, because they might have less communication skills and there is no fun to have their childhood passed with same kind of children.



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xniwl1i4

我倒觉得关键不在于用不用十天的模板，而在于用得自不自然。如果是生拉硬套模板，肯定不行，要掌握模板里面那些连词，连结句的用法，做到在你需要的时候信手拈来。

l2z1q3k5z

在考场上构思永远是时间不够。我最近复习英语，感觉像是手握两个烫山芋，中文水平下滑，英文继续保持没水平。心里头越着急，思路就越是断断续续抓不住。

寂寞灵魂在跳舞

个人感觉，逻辑上不清楚，语法错误比较多。当然，我自身水平也不高，大家一起切磋

落地无声的

跟着学习学习。

ddwvd760534r

多上论坛，灌逻辑性强内容充实丰富的水，边灌水边巩固议论文写法。我现在没事就看自己发过的帖子，这里可以，那里需要改进。其实我还算是操着笔杆子讨生活的人，也是一日不练三年生。

楚缘比

好的，多谢ls

我也觉得我有这个问题

正在努力充实论据中

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耀峰理财

我考了四次, 写作分别是: 5.5 , 7, 6.5, 6

我觉得你的主要问题不是语言本身, 而是内容比较空且逻辑不清....只有论点而没有实际佐证. 我的第一次5.5 就是犯了跑题和堆砌观点的问题.

个人认为模板是没用的,我的7分那次, 开头段和结尾段都只有一句话,可是主体段有论点有例子,个人觉得这个是拿分重点. 6.5 和6分那两次都有点跑题但是还是坚持在主体段上多花时间而简化开头和结尾.

个人经验, 与其强化语言,不如练习下逻辑和连接词.

t1642438

楼主，我刚好也写了一篇这个，copy 过来，再看看你写的，呵呵。。。。

The issue of whether schools should devide students in different groups according their abilities is of great concern to the public.Some people claim that students of diferent levels should be taught together;while others maintain that high level students need special treatment.To the best of my knowledge,both views have their own advantages and disadvantages.

Mixing students of different abilities in one class conduces to the development of students well-being.On the one hand ,the low-level students will not feel being discriminated in a mixing class.This is simply because no one wants to be labeled as an inferior student.On the other hand,with different levels of students in one class,everyone can be motivated to reach their potential and perform better in the process of learning.The intelligent students tend to be considered as role model by low level students in the same class.By learning and imitating the smart students ' behaviour ,low level students can improve their learning skills and study habits.Meanwhile,the intelligent students can achieve a sense of fulfilment and try to do better.

Although teaching students together has its inherent advantages,the merits of streaming should not be neglected .Firstly ,teachers can plan more suitable courses for their students of the same levels and do not need to worry about some students in their classes being left behind.Secondly,gathering high interlligent students in one class enable them to make faster progress.They can master new knowledge quickly and teachers can satisfy their needs of study pace.Finally,low achievers can benefit from a ralatively slow pace of learning.

In conclusion,schools can take measures to cater for students’ different needs,instead of simply deviding students in terms of their abilities.

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楚缘比

这篇文章看起来从教材上抄的？
呃
不太理解哦，囧