最近的essay,求指点

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space tourism should be developed to the public in future or not







Nowadays, there are increasing concerns on space tourism with the rapid development of space technology. However, whether space tourism should be developed to the public in future for entertainment is a controversial issue. From my point of view, I mainly agree that taking tourists to the outer space should be encouraged.



First, it has to be admitted that the ultimate purpose of technology should be to fulfill people’s increasing requirements of material and entertainment. As the matured technology of airplane, travelling by plane has already been an indispensable part of people’s life and played a dominant role in the process of globalization which greatly enriches their experience. So with the development of outer space technology, space tourism will become an inevitable tendency in future.



Moreover, the government has already invested massive resources, not only natural resource but also human resource, to the development of outer space technology, which imposes heavy burden to it. Actually government should not be totally accountable for the costs, the public need to play its part. So the ticket of the space tourism must be expensive to ensure that the project can get benefit from it.   



However, appealing as it may be, we should not neglect the negative effects that outer space tourism brings. It consumes large amount of natural resources and causes devastating pollution to the environment. But the space technology gets developed at the expense of the pollution, and we need to accept it.



In sum, outer space tourism satisfies people’s entertainment needs and it eases the heavy burden on government. But it brings pollution the environment. In my understanding, what we need to do is to accept it as positive, while at the same time keeping away from its drawbacks.

无聊的一族

我会形容为"vocal public discussion". "Vocal"是个形容.

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是  vocal public discussions  还是  public vocal discussions 呢？

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学习了。

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惭愧惭愧，要加紧潜心学习了。

tosewzgm5

烤鸭不知评分标准，要拿高分，难……

mk9s2w2r1i

coherence and cohesion以及task response，LZ可以去网上搜一下写作的官方评分标准，共分4项打分，其实LZ的语言挺好的，以后注意点task response的话7分不是问题。

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请问C&C  和 TR 是指什么啊？

『东方佛都』

假如打分的考官是女的呢？她了解这些吗？稳妥起见，还是不要轻易转换题目划定范围，同义词替换必须确保所指范畴一致。

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搜了下维基，outer space应该可以替换space：
Outer space, or simply space, is the void that exists between celestial bodies, including the Earth.
个人理解，就是指所有天体的外表面和大气层（如果有大气层的话）外的空间。同时，大气层内飞行器貌似不能称为spacecraft。