开个书信练习贴

gootdlan921 · 发表于 2011-10-31 14:29:27

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感觉小作文部分总是不给力。不是写的锉，就是占了太多时间，直接导致大作文时间不够，结果造成作文整体杯具。

今天开始把根据剑桥5-8的书信作文真题做的练习一篇篇贴出来，求高手指点。

前面2篇实际上都用了20-25分钟时间。

剑桥 5 A

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to make sincere apology for the noise from my house in the past few weeks. I really feel guilty for causing such an disturbance to you all in this neighbourhood.

As some of my neighbours may have learned, that my son, Tom, is going to take the entrance exam of the Royal Musical College. Therefore, he takes most of his spare time to practice his violin in order to achieve a better result in the exam. Unfortunately some of his practice happened to be at night, and this is my fault to have been unaware that how annoying the noise would be.

I hereby apologize to you again, and hopefully you will kindly grant forgiveness.

Although my son has to continue his practice, i have cleared up my basement and made a room as his studio. I believe there will not be as much noise as before. If the noise you can hear still prevent you sleeping as usual, please kindly let me know straight foward. I will procure some building material to install onto my basement to make it sound-proof.

Best Regards,

XXX

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魅幻丽人 · 发表于 2011-10-31 16:52:30

lz是职业评估和州担保都过了才考的鸭啊。。。。同路人一起加油吧。同挣扎于写作和口语的人。

gootdlan921 · 发表于 2011-10-31 23:21:48

剑桥 5 B

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to continue the evening course and this Friday will be my last attendance to the class, I'm afraid.

I am really sorry to have made the above decision, because in the past six months I have greatly benefited from your tutoring. However, as you may have already known, that I have a full-time job in the renowned chemical manufacturer Leicester & Co. I recently received an oversea assignment from the Company, which means I have to discontinue the course and get to take the expatriate job.

I am sure that you can understand my decision, since the compensation from Leicester & Co. is quite good, my career seems to become more promising with the overseas assignment. But it is a real pity for me to be unable to accomplish the course with you and my fellow classmates.

I would like to return the learning materials on this Friday and sign off any document that is required to officially terminate the course. Please kindly let me know if there are any additional procedure that need be done beforehand. You can reach me by my cellphone during the daytime.

Best Regards,
XXX