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发表于 2011-6-22 13:40:03
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来自： INNA
楼上，我报了10月22的雅思。。。。。貌似是有点晚。。。。弄个死命写出来的作文大家批评下。。。There is a definite link between education and the career success of an individual.The issue of whether students should start to work after gatduating from primary schools or secondary schools is of great concern for many people.To my way of think,lack of education is the root cause of unemployment;therefore ,being able to access to secondary education or higher levels of education is a key determinant of one's career success.
There are numerous disadvantages in only getting primary education.Primary schools only can provide students the most fundamental knowledges which are not enough for them to survive in this fast-changing society .Simple and basic skills acquired from primary education only can enable students to undertake some manual works.Such jobs are more likely to be associated with low salaries and socail sataus as well.Moreover,the employers tend to choose those candidates with various abilities and skills.
In fact,it is standard practice for most of countries in the world to make secondary education as part of complusory education.It is obviouse that governments have already realized that both individuals and nations can benefit from education;therefore,governments have a duty to raise the public awareness of the significance of secondary education,and ensure all their citizens can receive qualified secondary education.On the other hand,secondary education prepare students for tertiary education which is an indispendable part of our society.Without successful tertiary education ,there will be little progress in the field of technology and science.
In conclusion,not only is secondary education benefical to all the students' job seeking ，it also play a pivotal role in the development of our society.
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发表于 2011-6-23 03:16:32
