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Write an essay for an educated non-specialist on the following topic: More and more young people are sudying and working overseas and this will help to bring about greater international co-operation in the furture.
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In current days, the number of young people studying and working abroad is greatly increased, which will undoubtedly bring more interational co-operation.
In about a decade ago, studying and working overseas is seldomly discussed in our daily life. However, during recent years, we can see more and more people are doing it. For me, serval days ago, I heard that one of my classmate in junior middle school migrate to Austrialia with her husband, and serval of my university classmates are studying abroad in American and Singapore. Also, the increasing number of migrate and education agent in streets, can show the popularity of studying and working abroad.
When people work or study abroad, they bring with them the culture of their countries. When they communicate and make friends with local people, the different culture exchanges with each other. As in Shanghai, foreigners who work and live here are learning to use chopsticks while local people are having lunch in Papa John's. As the increasing of exchanges between different culture, people all over the world are getting more and more open minded, and having more concern on international events.
Besides the culture exchanges, techniqual exchanges between countries are very common now. Many companies have branches in foreign countries. And many people who study overseas choose to go back to work in their motherland. These help improve the international technique exchanges. The latest technolodgy will spread between countries in a short time.
Further more, advanced countries and developing countries are gathering around to discuss how to overcome golable problems, such as climate, evenvironment protection etc. As time goes on, there must be more co-operation between countries.
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第一个改正稿。。。。
感谢小小白虎，albert-shen08，R08813的帮助，洞穿了这么多单词拼写、用错词组、用错时态、单复数等等等错误。 最重要的是，帮我指出文章立意上的不足。。。但是这个是先天缺失，不能通过修改来进步。。就像R08813说的：I would have rewritten your essay completely. 其实我也很想 rewritten completely，可是，关于这个话题真的不知道说什么好啊，有虾米可以说的啊，所以先改语法等可以改的错误，于是有了第一个改正稿。。。
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Nowadays, the number of young people studying and working abroad has dramatically increased. This will lead to greater interational co-operation, in culture and technology fields especially.
In about ten years ago, studying and working overseas was seldom mentioned in daily life. However, we can see that this has become a hot topic in recent years. Take me for instance, our manager, who joined the company a couple months ago, is back from Canada. Also, several of my university classmates are studying abroad in American or Singapore. Besides, the increasing number of migration and education agents also shows how popular studying and working abroad is.
People go abroad to work or study, they bring their own culture to new places. When they communicate and make friends with local people, the different cultures blend. As in Shanghai, foreigners who work and live here learn to use chopsticks while local people have lunch in Papa John's. As people share their cultures, they will become more and more open-minded and pay more attention to international affairs.
Besides cultural exchanges, technical exchanges between countries is also very common. Many companies have branches in foreign countries. Lots of people who study overseas choose to work in their home country. These help improve the international technical exchanges. As a result, the latest technology will grow across countries in a short time.
Further more, developed and developing countries are gathering around to discuss how to overcome global problems, such as climate change, evenvironmental protection etc. As time goes by, there should be more co-operation across countries.
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R08813同学，如果有空的话，可以的话，麻烦帮我rewrite it completely吧！ 我实在很想参考下这样的文章要怎样去立意，而不要这么肤浅拿例子来堆砌充字数。。。。
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多谢R08813]
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