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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-27 16:55:43 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


呵呵,我请同事改了,大家来看看,
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发表于 2010-3-28 02:54:02 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


说一声...这文章字数少了点...很可能低分的


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发表于 2010-3-28 08:16:56 | 只看该作者 来自: INNA


(This is as far as I can help you...)

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious in many parts of the globe. Nowadays we usually listen to the news about natural disasters such as sandstorm, mudflow, drought and so on. What happened to our environment? Why has it become so bad?

Although these disasters happen naturally, I believe human activities might also be a relevant factor. Due to the rapid economic development, human beings have caused a lot of harm to the nature which every living creature depends on. For example, trees are cut down, water is wasted and poured to the river and poison gas is created by the industry. The air becomes polluted and is unhealthy to breathe. Furthermore, the pollution is so severe that you can find rubbish everywhere.

Let us begin to protect our environment right now. We should stop doing anything that is harmful to our nature and protect the endangered species. This is the only globe that we can live in. Most importantly, legislation must be introduced to punish those involved with destructive acts to the environment.

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