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题目：The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
作文：
According to the documentary film HOME, there are over 1 billion cars in current world, and this number is still increasing rapidly. The consequent side effects include air pollution, tranfic jams, and even wide-spread healthy problems caused by lack of exercise. Taking them into account, should we consider discouraging people to use cars?
Living on cars will definitely lead to many problems. First of all, the fuel is a severe problem because the fossil fuel deposit is running down while scientists have not found another type of fuel which is as good as fossil fuel. What would happen when we had used off all the deposit? Nobody knows. Secondly, even if we have more than serveral decades to think about the question one, we must admit there are already heavy air pollutions currently, in which cars are playing an important role. Carbon dioxide from the burning of fossil fuel is becoming a threat to human being. Thirdly, for each individuls, driving has replaced walking, and sickness caused by lack of exersing is threating increasingly amount of people.
However, cars mean another way of life for us. Driving introduces flexibility and convinience to our life. People can easily get to their destination by their own schedule, and this is very important for today's economy. Every govenment rialises that widely using of cars is neccessary for national economy and development. Furthermore, for individuals, life with a car seems happier with life without it.
In conclusion, cars lead to many problems, of which are dangerous for human being. But cars is a current way of life, and people need them indeed. Maybe the best way to solve the problem is to develop new types of energy to replace the fossil fuel.
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发表于 2010-4-28 12:27:09
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