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发表于 2010-8-18 00:15:17
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来自： INNA
楼主的小作文应该属于Letters of Complaint的category. 是一种formal style的书信。
我现在也在学习准备下次的烤鸭，没啥好提供给楼主的建议，我就抄几段关于这种类型的书信的描述，我们一起进步哦。
A formal letter of complaint is written to complaint about a problem which has arisen (e.g. faulty merchandise, rude staff, inaccurate information, etc). It should explain the reasons for the complaint, and usually includes a suggestion/ request/ demand concerning what should be done ( e.g. refund, compensation, etc ).
这篇书信应该属于inaccurate information的category。是该complaint一下子了。
complaint的程度也有轻重之分，参见下面所述。
Mild or strong language can be used depending on the wirter's feelings and the seriousness of the complaint, but abusive language must never be used.
e.g. Mild Complaint:
I am writing to complain about a factual error in yesterday's newspaper.
I hope that you will give this matter your prompt attention.
Strong Complaint:
I am writing to express my strong disapproval concerning the offensive behaviour of an employee at your company's Winchester Road branch.
I demand a full, written apology or I will be forced to take legal action.
formal style的书信，按照书上建议套用下面的方式比较合适：
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
full name
我的作文最好成绩是5分，不过我觉得有信心搞定它，立足6分，争取7分就是我的目标。
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