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Some people who failed at school can be highly successful in their adult life. Discuss why this happens and explain the main factors contributing to a successful life.



In a knowledge-based society, people give top priority to education because they are convinced that excellent academic performances promise a bright future for the young. Interestingly, it is often reported that some of those who lead a successful life turned out to be under achievers at school. I believe there are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon. In this essay i would explore the causes and discuss the contributing factors to a success.



First of all, in spite of the fact that the meaning of success varies from person to person, it is generally acknowledged that a successful life means either a brilliant career or happy family life or the perfect combination of the both. Apparently, a pleased family life seems nothing to do with the school report of straight A. In contrast, good people skills and a thankful heart always make sense when it comes to this point. A brilliant career, meanwhile, does not merely depend on how excellent one's academic studies are. For instance, some celebrated sports personalities, despite little schooling, excel in specific events and become top professional players as a result of their gifted talent and hard work.



However, the fact that the ratio of those high achievers with sound academic background to those without is high also proves education takes an active part in process of obtaining success. In addition, continuing efforts, being well-prepared for the opportunities, healthy interpersonal relationships, outstanding communication skills all help achieve the goal.



To sum up, a success life indicates different meanings to different individuals but a few special successful cases cannot deny the important role of school education. Under no circumstances can one attain objectives if he does not possess the qualities mentioned above.



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