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发表于 2010-12-22 15:34:02
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来自： INNA
感谢楼上各位鼓励，3WD老师的建议我会去看看的。
我现在正在上班，三班倒，但事情不多可以写写作文啊什么的。又不能让同事知道我再学雅思，只能说谎说在考四六级，所以听写也是有时间。在家的时候就看看报纸或上网练阅读，厕所还有面大镜子可以练口语（所以我老婆说我的口语有家里厕所的味道）
The second essay
Putting criminals into prison is not effective in dealing with them. Instead, education and job training should be provided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In this day and age, as human society is progressing rapidly on various areas, the incidence of crime is increasing as well. Subsequently, a vast number of offenders should be incarcerated or be rehabilitated has been a topic of controversy.
It is no doubt that, the people who commit a crime should be brought to justice. To imprison criminals could reduce already high criminal rate, thereby keeping society safe and stable. Some countries make laws with strict penalty that is efficient for the sake of control the incidence of crime to the limit. Furthermore, if we do not punish perpetrators that could be unfair to victims. I would be hard-pressed to imagine that to send a flagitious criminal to school but cell.
But on the other hand, offenders who are disimprisoned could rever to crime if they have not acquired any education and reform but a sense of grudge against society which has been created by punishment they suffered. Hence, it is important that to raise the inmates' awareness of complying with the law in order to mould them become law-abiding citizens. Likewise, convicts could be allowed to acquire vocational training. As a consequence, they hold survival skill to deal with their new life. Given the choice, people trend to earn money by their work rather than take a risk to violate the law.
All in all, incarceration and reformation are not mutually exclusive, a person who has broken the law should be brought to justice and he or she should acquire rehabilitation and occupational training in the prison.
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发表于 2010-12-21 22:30:43
