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tbhy6131 · 发表于 2011-2-11 17:31:17

精神上支持楼主!

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-2-11 19:32:25

你也要加油

hussau51sf · 发表于 2011-2-11 21:24:13

lz我来啦！可能来不及每天一篇，但是我会把每次练习的作文贴过来跟大家交流的！已经决定报3月19号的，向4*7冲刺！！
家里还有一个要考雅的，下次把她的作文也贴过来请大家修改！

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-2-12 03:56:55

加油！看来3/19要腥风血雨了说。

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-2-12 11:29:01

The thirtieth essay

Some people believe a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people go to university. Others argue that it only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both and give your own opinion.

Answer:

As increasing students have easily gained entrances to colleges in contemporary society, some people think nations would benefit from it, which youngsters trend to go to universities. But, others do not think so and believe it could bring graduate joblessness. In this essay, I will analyse both view and pose my own opinion.

Indeed, majority youths go to school will definitely benefit countries. First and foremost, universities will cultivate a vast number of persons with ability for national development in various areas. More precisely, not only will students acquire specialistic knowledge from schooling, but also they can learn how to deal with their peers thereby enriching their social experience because a school is society in miniature. Likewise, students will find their interests and get information about career planning during university days. As a consequence, they have sufficient knowledge and abilities to rapidly adjust themselves to start careers after they graduate.

However, as a matter of fact, increasing graduates cannot find decent job in present-day society. But in my view, graduate joblessness might not caused by majority youngsters attending universities. There always occurs graduates unemployment even if universities stop to accept students at all. Actually, graduates' awareness drive the incidence of joblessness up. Obviously, some graduates unwilling to do some labourious jobs. Instead, they prefer sitting in the offices, tackling easy business and gaining lots of money. In consequence, they might always finding and losing. But provided that universities would pay attention to orient graduates to face job opportunities aright, the unemployment rate might be reduced.

Summarily, In my view, countries will benefit from high percentage of youngster go to universities. And that might not cause graduate unemployment. Instead, graduates' awareness are the main contributor to drive unemployment rate up. But universities' orientation can help to improve.

ujpmnvqlp · 发表于 2011-2-12 23:28:06

楼主，我是来找感觉的。

每当学不下去时，就来这上面逛逛，让别人的闪耀耀的“下签作业贴”刺激一下我，好接着努力去～

加油！

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-2-13 10:05:21

加油！付出肯定有回报的。

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-2-13 16:22:54

The thirty-first essay

Nowadays, the gap between the rich and the poor is increasing, discuss the causes and the solutions.

Answer:

In this day and age, the gap between the affluent and the needy has increasingly widened. In this essay, I will analyse some possible reasons and propose some solutions.

As a matter of fact, the gap between the income and the consumption might be the main cause. More precisely, the prices of necessitates have been increasing high currently. As a consequence, the poor hardly deal with their daily lives because of their less income. Even they cannot afford a decent meal every day. By contrast, the affluent might not worry about their lives. They have sufficient money to live comfortably and have much remained money to invest for the sake of earning more. Subsequently, the prices of commodities are continuing to rise since the wealthy promote the consumption. This vicious circle makes the needy more impoverished and the affluent more rich than before.

However, the governments' effort would improve this situation. Firstly, to put heavy taxes on luxuries would be a good attempt for narrowing the gap. By that, the affluent need to pay more money on their luxury lives and the needy will not be impacted. Subsequently, governments can use those money which received from taxes to adjust the prices of necessitates for the needy. Likewise, they can also boost welfare and alms for the sake of augment the deprived people's income. Therefore, the poor can live more comfortable than before and can save remained money to make their household better. In the course of time, the gap between the needy and the rich would be narrowed to the limit.

Summarily, in my view, the gap between the income and the consumption might be the main contributor to widen the gap between the poor and the rich. But, government can take measure such as putting luxury taxes, adjusting prices of necessitates and boosting welfare and alms to improve this situation.

随缘园 · 发表于 2011-2-13 16:59:16

这第30篇和前面有一篇都是谈高校教育的，一个谈专业一个说就业率，其实两者有联系，我把上一篇稍作了下修改。大作文几个大类：社会、科技、教育、文化等等，两种题型：论证观点和解决问题，我现在的一个想法是每个类型准备一篇，再根据题目变化引申

请教：they realized the returns for the education was not substantial enough...
我的理解这里的returns是作回报讲，后面跟for意思是教育所带来的回报
原文是they realized the returns to the education they actually had access to was not substantial enough...
为什么原文returns后面跟to呢？

题目：

正文：
For a subject arouses such strong passions, "university education" is indeed difficult to pin down. For student's perspective, embarking on collage study for several years would be worth if the market rewards the skills they learnt. Thus, I am side with that society as well as individual will be the beneficiaries of high enrolment rate of universities.

The concept sounds simple enough: a more market-oriented higher education system can do much better than state-dominated model. The high premium to skilled labour results from the higher education system not providing enough skilled labour to keep up with the demand technology created. In a short word, demand increased faster than supply. That may explain why many universities have not just compressed technical courses' duration from four years to three, but also they have lowered the admission requirements. Enrolling more students and emphasising on vocational training are actually quite beneficial, back to thirty years ago, Wall Street firms realized that some physicists could work out differential equations and recruited them as analysts and traders to compensate shortage of specialists from economics and finance.

Admittedly, advances come with stings. Demand for those who graduated from more selective institutions as well as those with post-graduate degrees is still enormous. But demand for remaining group is less strong. In addition, workers might have recognized the value of education and initially pursued it, but they could finally realize the returns for the education was not substantial enough to warrant time away from labour market.

I do not believe that university education is intended for elite few, in order for more people to benefit from the education, being it completing higher education, universities need to supply the skills the market rewards.

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yxjpv904483 · 发表于 2011-2-13 20:47:25

Because "return to" is the real phrase. You can say "the return on the education" (here you are viewing education as an investment) or "the return to the education". When the word "return" is used as a noun, "return on/to" is the only possible combinations you have.

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