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最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-8 12:33:45

The twelfth essay

Someone think children should attend extra classes after school, others disagree. Discuss both opinion and give your own view.

Answer:

Parents and educational institutions have paid much attention to studengts' education in this day and age. Some people claim kids should enter for extracurriculum class after school, but others do not think so. In this essay, I will discuss both view and pose my own opinion.

No doubt that, Kids receive various education would be beneficial to them, they would acquire diverse knowledge and become versatile. Of course, every parents are keen to anticipate their children well-rounded. "Don't let your child fail at the starting point ", that has become a motto that claimed by the most of parents. Therefore, they think it is insufficient that children just received education from schooling. Instead, they send their kids to attend extracurriculum class after school. Parents deem they are right, the reason is simple, kids acquire sufficient knowledge that would help them to confront the fierce competition in the future.

However, excessive education would put enormous pressure on children. As we know, Children are naturally playful and innocent, they have strong imagination and creativity by nature and developing those through play. these abilities are important to children's future and could be limitedly acquired through schooling as well. Whereas, extra classes would deprive their time to play, because they have lots of work to do after really finish class such as scholastic homeworks and extra homeworks. In the course of time, kids would lack of creativity and imagination but an abundance of academic knowledge. That is why other parents claim "return the innocence back to the children".

Summarily, In my opinion, children should study hard in school and play to the top of their bent after school.

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-8 23:44:17

The thirteenth essay

Do you think people going abroad for study or work for one or two years should bring their families with them?

Answer:

As there are increasing numbers of people study or work abroad in this day and age, whether their families should accompany with them if they just go abroad for one or two years or not. That has become a topic of discussion. In my view, I agree with that household members should be together whatever going abroad for long-term or short-term.

First and foremost, people go abroad with their families that whould not only maintain the family bonds but also give them motivation to hold firmly to their work or study. Persons are naturally homesick, in particular at strange places. They would miss their family when they have worked or studied for a period of time, and vice versa. Subsequently, homesickness would frustrate the people and cause their work or study less efficient; even, strong homesickness is a main cause of that people abnegate their enterprise abroad and go back to their countries. In contrast, people with their families abroad would encourage them to fight for their ideality and their families during this hard period.

However, Some negative effects occur when family members go with these people at the first part of the period of time. First of all, The language is the biggest problem for their families, they would just have one thing to do at first —— learn new language. particularly, children they brought could not come up with their peers' study as they have to study language first. Similarly, wives or husbands could not adjust themselves to the new cities but only learn new language. Furthermore, they leave their friends, relatives and acquaintances away and place themselves to the strange places. Whereas, just because of these, after the adaptive phase, they would really know if these new places are adapted to them and get choices whether going back to hometown or migrating to this new country.

All in all, people go abroad with their family could stimulate them, and through the hard adaptive phase they could find whether these new countries are really adapted to them.

晕，好像感觉作文越写越长了。。。刻意为控制字数急刹车。

草草决定 · 发表于 2011-1-9 07:40:46

闪动兄弟，2011快到了，来你帖子看看，祝新年快乐，雅思全7！

bmce5819 · 发表于 2011-1-9 15:15:19

这样坚持半年的话，何止4个7，4个8也不成问题的。
最主要还是在坚持。

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-10 02:12:12

茉莉姐，祝你一切顺利。。。

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-10 05:37:11

4个7我就。。。8我也不想了。若是让我去国外实习个两年我还敢干他一下。

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-10 11:57:48

The fourteenth is letter

You have applied a course to a collage in Australia, but you still have not received the reply. Write a letter to state.
1.The details of the course;
2.Why you choose the course;
3.Why you need the reply soon.

Answer:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Writing this letter because I was wondering if you could give me response about the English course which I had applied last three months.

As I known on the Internet, your collage provide an Accelerated English Course. It takes three months as a term and has class every workdays' nights. I'm oversea now and will arrive Australia about next month. As you know, the newcomers have lots of work to do such as renting house, finding work and something like that. Therefore, this course's schedule is plenty suit me, as I could do my business at day and have class at night.

While I haven't receive your response yet, although I had applied this course lasting three months. I'm so worry about that, because the day I'll go to Austrilia is increasingly near. Provided that you have send reply to me that maybe means it has lost, please send it to me again.

I'm looking forward to receive your reply soon and thanks for your help in advance.

your sincerely,
Jason Lee

今天很不开心，茉莉姐走了，对我来说是损失了一位老师，但换句话来说其实也是一种打击，即努力并不一定就有回报，纠结啊。。。不是为了雅思，可能是人生，或是将来所要面对的。不管了，想太多了，先把鸭子搞定再说！

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最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-10 17:25:08

祝各位TX新年快乐^_^

最难缠钉子户 · 发表于 2011-1-10 22:18:16

在新年里，送给TX们一个礼物，不是什么好东西，G类雅思历届考试题目。我自己在其他网站上收集的，压缩在一起了，希望对大家有帮助。
没想到附件太大，抱歉大家分卷下载吧。
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青青sai · 发表于 2011-1-11 07:50:39

shan是个奋进的好TX。
OK ,there we go.
Let's spare no effort in preparing IELTS !

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