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发表于 2011-12-27 17:06:00 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式 来自: INNA

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8. Modern lifestyles make many people hard to lead active and health lives. Why this case causes? How to suggest the governments and other large companies to help them do more exercise?

二月份考试,现在速度老是上不去怎么办啊。

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Recently, according to an investigation carried out by National Institutes of Health, sub-health has become a severe problem in modern society. The investigation also shows that there is a definite link between modern lifestyles and people’s health situation. This issue has drawn widespread attention. The following are the possible causes for this phenomenon.



It is obvious that the process of urbanization and globalization has influenced people’s way of life greatly, which makes many people hard to lead to an active and health lives. As we know, today’s society is a competitive one, in order to survive in this cutthroat society, people have to work very hard. As a consequence, many people do not have enough time to rest and do exercise, which has detrimentally impact on people’s health. Further, for the sake of saving time, some people eat too much fast food that full of fat and salt, which easily result in obesity. As a main cause of cardiovascular disease, obesity has blamed for hundreds of thousands of deaths each year. What is more, due to fierce competition in work, many people are under pressure for a long time. It is reported that high levels of stress may lower individuals’ immunity to common illnesses.



In light of above factors, I tend to believe that doing more exercise is actually a feasible way to improve individuals’ health. Governments and companies should join forces to tackle this issue.

For the governments, they should invest more money in sports facilities and arrange more holidays for people, while companies should organize more outdoor activities such as traveling, swimming, and mountain climbing.



To sum up, each individual can hardly escape the influence of modernization. What we must do is to try our best to maintain a healthy lifestyle, no matter how busy or how tired we are.



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看起来不错啊,逻辑结构很清晰。。。


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