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这个月就要考雅思了，但是作文还没怎么练过，这个第一篇，求给位给批改下，多谢啦。。。。不知道能的多少分，呵呵。
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others
,however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it,
should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these
views and give your own opinion.
The issue of whether each kind of crime should be punished fixedly has sparked off intense
controversy. Some individuals claim that they agree with this view, while many others hold
contrary opinion that the circumstances , motivations and any other related factors should be
taken into consideration while judging crimes. In this essay, I aim at discussing both sides of this
problem and put up my own opinion.
It is undeniable that , to some extent, fixed punishment for each type of crime can indeed
reduce our workload in terms of many respects. To begin with, this fixed pattern can help us to
be less time-consuming and boost the effiency of judging crimes. So ,we will have more energy
to do other meanful and significant things. Besides that, It is unnecessary to spend a large
amount of money in checking the whole process of crime. What we only need to do is finding
out which are the solutions to these kinds of crimes according to the law.
On the other hand, the opponents argue that fixed punishment is unfair, as judging crimes is a
quiet complicated thing. The most vital we should pay attention to is not only the phenomenon
of crimes themselves, but also the circumstances, motivations and anything relatedly. These
factors can generate a variety of results. If we do not conside them, somebody may be put into
prison incorrectly. What is more seriously, the goverment may not be trusted any more, and
the society will not be safe and stable. Therefore, it is definitely wrong to decide on the
punishment fixedly.
In summary, I concede that fixed punishment has a few advantages . Nevertheless, I am
convinced that it is not fair and can lead to seriously problems which you may not image.
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发表于 2012-2-4 10:40:00
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