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发表于 2012-2-23 07:02:16
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来自： INNA
其实还是中式英语的问题。全文的思路就是很中国式的英语学习观点
其实LZ也注意到了，剑桥上的7分范文不见得用了多华丽的语法和吓人的词汇，但胜在地道。
这一点只有靠多读解决，切记是读真正的鬼子写的文章。
观点逻辑不论，遣词造句也有提升空间。尝试重写了一下第四段，文意不变：
Apart from that, it is easier for children to learn a foreign language when they are young because of their good memory. Research shows that the best period of people’s memory is between 10 to 15 years old. Generally speaking, learning language need recite a lot of materials including words, grammar and phrases. Thus, on this stage, primary school students have more advantages than their older competitors.
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Furthermore, children at early ages have the advantage of better memory, which benefits language learning. According to the researches this advantage peaks at age 10 to 15. Typical methods of improving second language skills may involve extensive memorization of vocabulary and grammatical paradigms, which could be performed much more efficiently by young learners than their high school counterparts.
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