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8 Some people think that people who read for pleasure can develop their imagination and language skills while those who prefer to watch TV cannot. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Compared with reading books, watching TV is more appealing to individuals, as it has vivid pictures as well as nice sound. However, some people believe that reading can greatly promote the development of one’s imagination and language skills while watching TV can do nothing but for entertainment. Personally, I agree their view, but I would qualify it to some extent.

It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that individuals can benefit greatly from books. To start with, reading is a good way to learn languages both native and foreign ones. This is mainly due to the fact that reading can improve one’s spelling and increase one’s vocabulary, which are essential for language learning. Plenty of evidence has shown that children who read more often can master a language well and quickly than those do not. An even more significant advantage should be taken into account is that reading can actually help people to develop their imagination. It is generally known that each book embody writer’s invention and imagination, people who read it may be inspired and have creative and imaginative thoughts.

However, it is worth pointing out that there also arguments support the opinion that watching TV can also contribute to one’s development. The main reason is that watching TV is more interesting that reading books. For example, there a large number of educational programs are being on show each day, which have rich contents and various forms. They are more successful in drawing people’s attention than books. Consequently, people can learn a language easily.

To conclude, although watching TV provides us an amazing experience, I believe that reading is so far the main way as well as the most efficient way in learning. All in all, it would be sensible to combine them together so that people can benefit more.

pcghfjefders · 发表于 2012-4-1 15:49:49

我觉得“独门烤鸭菜谱”，比较适用你的情况
http://www.freeoz.biz/ibbs/thread-968114-1-1.html

我的英语我不好。个人观点，仅供参考！

Compared with reading books, watching TV is more appealing to individuals, as it has vivid pictures as well as nice sound. However, some people believe that reading can greatly promote the development of one’s imagination and language skills while watching TV can do nothing but for entertainment. Personally, I agree their view, but I would qualify it to some extent.
However后面的语气不够肯定。

It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that individuals can benefit greatly from books. To start with, reading is a good way to learn languages (这里是否加上of?)both native and foreign ones. This is mainly due to the fact that reading can improve one’s spelling and increase one’s vocabulary, which are essential for language learning. Plenty of evidence has shown that children who read more often can master a language well (是否该成better) and (more) quickly than those (who) do not. An even more significant advantage should be taken into account is that reading can actually help people to (去掉to?) develop their imagination. It is generally known (提调成well accepted?) that each book embody (单复数形式?) writer’s invention and imagination, people who read it may (改成could) be inspired and have (thereby having) creative and imaginative thoughts.

However, it is worth pointing out that there (are) also arguments (which) support the opinion that watching TV can also contribute to one’s development. The main reason is that watching TV is more interesting that (than) reading books. For example, there a large number of educational programs are being on show each day, which have rich contents and various forms (whick开头的句子改成 for rich contents and in various forms). They are more successful in drawing people’s attention than books. Consequently, people can learn a language easily. （最后两句话的逻辑不清楚）

To conclude, although watching（去掉watching?) TV provides us an amazing experience, I believe that reading is so far the main way as well as the most efficient way in learning. All in all, it would be sensible to combine them together so that people can benefit more.

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