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花了一个多小时写的文章， 如果这个不到7，基本可以认为我就无力到7了。
上次贴了一个作文，感谢大家的回应，吸取了大家的宝贵意见。这次增加了短句子，使长短句结合。
题目的内容被paraphrase后写在文章中。
用了一些平常不太用的词，希望是所谓的band 7 words吧。呵呵
结构上也更注意，八股文体。呵呵。
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Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
The number of travelers has been increasing significantly, and it seems this trend will continue for a long period of time. This essay attempts to discover the intrinsic reasons of this phenomenon and describe the various benefits of travelling.
The reasons for travelling to become so popular are many and varied. Firstly, it is widely acknowledged that travelling provides many benefits, and this is the fundamental factor for it to prevail. Secondly, with the economic growth and the development of international trade, people become wealthier and thus can afford travelling more frequently and farer. Thirdly, human beings are undertaking much bigger pressure than ever at workplace due to the intense competition and fast rhythm of modern society. There is high demand, therefore, for some effective methods for people to escape away from the daily chaos. Travelling is undoubtedly an applicable and useful approach. Finally, the use of internet promotes tourism. Many people now post their travelling experiences on the internet with awesome pictures and interesting stories, which can influence others strongly and generate followers.
Travelling offers both mental and physical benefits to its performers. From mental perspective, staying in a beautiful scenic spot enables people to forget about their daily troubles or pressures and give their minds a rest. Moreover, exposed to another lifestyle or culture, people on the road can definitely enrich their experiences and enlarge their perspective. As a return, they will understand the world and themselves more deeply and thoroughly. From physical point of view, it usually requires a large amount of walking while traveling, which helps with the health building.
As a summary, out of all sorts of reasons, many people nowadays are keen on journeys to other places and they earn a lot of advantages from this behavior.
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发表于 2012-4-22 10:25:38
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