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发表于 2012-4-25 20:09:50
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来自： INNA
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Nowadays, the weight level of some countries’ people is relatively higher than before and the health and fitness level are not as good as before as well. Firstly, many factors contribute to this social phenomenon, such as less sport, eating too much, pollution and so on. In the meantime, lots of measures and approaches can be used to relieve this and make people healthier and fitter.
Apparently, less sport activities is the first reason for people’s overweight and worse health level. In the present time, people are busier (no need to use comparative degree here, because no target to compare explicitly) working and doing housework, especially in the city area. This kind of life cannot permit, for example, the city dwellers, to have enough time doing(to do) sports regularly and frequently. Therefore, their health is getting bad. Moreover, eating habit also plays a key role. With the increasing level of people’s material life, people are eating more food besides rice and fruits(fruit, is normally an uncountable noun), including meat and fast food. This(These) unhealthy habit(s) make many person(people) be(remove "be") overweight and of bad health. Additionally, environmental pollution cannot be excluded. As the environment we are living in is not as clean as before, everybody’s immune system are(is) becoming worse slowly，which also leads to people’s bad health.
Although this problem is(these problems are, I think you mentioned more than one problem) getting worse and many people are influenced by it(them), many measures can stop it(them) from deteriorating. Doing more exercises can help many people a lot, especially (for) office ladies and computer engineers. Taking part in sports regularly can improve their health level mentally and physically. Moreover, keeping healthy eating habits also benefits everybody. For example, eating more fruits(fruit) and vegetable(vegetables. Isn't it weird? But right, unlike "fruit", "vegetable" is countable. Always use "fruit and vegetables") and less meat will probably help people keep fit. Finally travelling also help people be healthy and fit．When people are travelling，they can forget the pressure of life and work．This experience can force them to get rid of long time sitting, which is also a good way to keep healthy and fit.
Ｉｎ ｃｏｎｃｌｕｓｉｏｎ， ｐｅｏｐｌｅ＇ｓ ｏｖｅｒｗｅｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ａｎｄ ｂａｄ ｈｅａｌｔｈ ａｔｔｒｉｂｕｔｅｓ ｔｏ ｖａｒｉｏｕｓ ｒｅａｓｏｎｓ，ｓｕｃｈ ａｓ ｌｅｓｓ ｓｐｏｒｔ，ｂａｄ ｅａｔｉｎｇ ｈａｂｉｔ．．．．．Ｉｆ ｐｅｏｐｌｅ ｔａｋｅ ｓｏｍｅ ａｃｔｉｏｎｓ， ｆｏｒ ｅｘａｍｐｌｅ，ｍｏｒｅ ｓｐｏｒｔｓ， ｐｅｏｐｌｅ ｗｉｌｌ ｂｅｎｅｆｉｔ ｆｒｏｍ ｔｈｅｍ．
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