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发表于 2012-4-18 02:36:29
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来自： INNA
先不说段落主旨和论据。
我看了25楼LZ自己重新贴的那段，写的真是有点晦涩啊。不看你翻译的中文的话，我看得有点晕。用词有点不太精准。举例的写法非常有中文风格，可能你是想用点高级地道的词汇，但是好像效果不佳。
It is commonly believed that not only students but also teachers spend more time and energy if there is an examination which both of them need prepared. 人们普遍相信如果学生和老师需要准备考试那么他们都需要付出额外的时间和精力.
it is commonly believed that to prepare for exams, not only students but also teachers would have to take great extra efforts, which however could have been utilized in learning new chapters of knowledge. 蓝色的这半句可以用来取代下一段。
People may think it is an extra pay and it would be better if we take advantage of this period time to learn more knowledge, but I am not wholly agree with this opinion. 同时大家也许认为这是一个额外的付出,我们可以用这段时间去学习更多的知识.
extra pay 用在这里我觉得不顺啊。可以考虑这样写，people may think this cost of time or effort unnecessary, because it can be better utilized in learning more new knowledge instead.
The key point is, we cannot build a skyscraper without solid foundation, which means students need review the knowledge they learnt before (via examination) and confirm they handle it well first. 关键在于,我们建造摩天大楼的时候不能缺失坚固的基础.
It would be meaningless if teacher continue teach students new knowledge regardless of care about whether listeners can master the theory. 老师不断教学生新的知识而不顾他们的掌握情况是毫无意义的.
For instance, people suggest pupils to learn more about advanced mathematics, but meantime, they are not an expert in four arithmetic operations. 例如,人们建议小学生学习高等数学,但是同时他们都不能掌握四则运算. How they can achieve that? 他们如何学好高数?
以上关于摩天大楼和高数的举例，总觉得非常CHINGLISH啊，估计老外跟不上你的思路的。
Therefore, it is worth to spend some time on examination to evaluate whether students master the knowledge well in order to figure the strategy of study out. 所以, 花时间在考试上去估计学生是否已经掌握完全并制定学习策略是值得的.
Therefore, it is definitely worthwhile to invest time and effort on holding examination, which for the moment turns out to be a very cost-effective approach to evaluate students' learning progress, so that corresponding teaching methods could be figured out accordingly.
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