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发表于 2012-9-1 11:51:57
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来自： INNA
Task Response 4 / 5
Coherence and Cohesion 4 / 5
Lexical Resource 4
Grammatical Range and Accuracy 4
overall 4 / 4.5
************************************** Here is what I wrote:
Past few decades have seen an exponential growth in the availability of computers in our daily life. Yet, there still exists some dispute as to weather the overall effect of this new technology has been positive or not. I personally agree that the widespread of computers, if well managed, would engender much more benefits than drawbacks in terms of instant communication and informative contents.
For one thing, it is an irrefutable fact that the massive adoption of computers has fundamentally revolutionized the ways we communicate with others. Despite the risk of 'social isolation', a common phenomenon normally occurring amid those spending too much time sitting in front of a computer rather than involving in real social activities, most of us are largely benefited from that convenient and efficient communication methods when keeping in touch with our acquaintances.
Another aspect, equally important, is that computers could provide us endless information to cater for our different purposes. Academic writing, for example, more often than not, would be a time consuming task in the old days due to the lack of available resources. However, nowadays, assisted by computers, a researcher could be granted plenty of useful information and templates that would boost the efficiency and enhance the productivity. In spite of this, we could not deny that some basic skills, such as hand writing, would be influenced and experience recession if overly depending on computers.
By way of conclusion, I would reaffirm my position that given the massive adoption of computers these days, the positive points would be outweighing its negative aspects, if well organized and properly thought out, especially in promoting instant mutual communication and providing informative up-to-date contents.
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