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发表于 2012-7-7 23:25:02
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来自： INNA
说到写作了，这可能是大家最关注的，也是最坑爹的：从小到大就没有哪个老师教过怎么写英语作文，至少对我来说是这样的。自从3鸭以来，写作基本上都是6.5，就是这0.5的差距让我付出了近1年半的努力，应该说不是件简单的事。教育失败是一个因素，不了解雅思写作的要求是另一方面：不了解考官看重什么，不清楚需求，那做不好是理所应当的。以下跟大家分享一下自己的一些体会。
宏观来说，好作文应该做到清晰、流畅、优雅，这是本人的草根理解。清晰就是观点明确，结构清楚，让人一目了然；流畅应了古人所谓行云流水的说法，这里包括了句子间、段落间的连接以及前后的逻辑关系；所谓优雅就是有别于通篇大白话（比如user manual），说得稍微文雅一点，显得文化一点。贴一个本人之前的习作，大家可以看看做没做到这三点。
Meeting someone for the first time through the internet is never a good idea. Do you agree?
It is manifestly clear that we are facing an increasing reliance on the internet. People try to meet friends through it even if they have never met each other before. Such trend, admittedly, produces problems to some extent, but is quite valuable for us, since it adds to the efficiency of communication.
Establishing contacts via the internet has the reputation of being dangerous, uncertain and unsafe. The chief problem is that you have little idea about who is sitting in front of the screen on the other end of the web: is it a criminal wanted, or a cold-blooded outlaw. Through the messages being exchanged, you can by no means assure their validity and certainty. In this case, how can we build trust with the chatting mate via cyberspace? So it seems the internet may be far from a wise choice to set-up personal links.
This opinion, however, does not survive the experiences in which trust has already been built in advance. That particularly applies to the daily work in a company, especially an international one. It is not necessary for an employee newly joining to get familiar with all the staff before embarking on work. But as the colleagues come from the same corporation, they are trusted correspondingly as a result, so that confidential information can be transferred without any barrier.
Granted, even under such circumstance, leakage of information and pirating are inevitable if some employees commit crimes against the company. But this only happens rarely if sufficient protecting regulations have been applied.
In conclusion, whether meeting someone new through the internet is a good approach depends on the level of trust. Without something of this kind, communication of any kind will be by no means fruitful. The implications of all this is that it is not the means of communication that matters, but the establishment of trust.
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发表于 2012-7-8 11:10:40
