【交流帖】10月12日a类雅思大作文题目习作，求切磋

e44bph7g0b · 发表于 2013-10-28 00:51:32

腻歪写八股文了,
几分不知道,考场上让我这么写也写不出来,时间不够再加上紧张,最后还得是八股文

ulh0w6x7c · 发表于 2013-10-28 01:39:48

发重复了....

咖啡因颗颗 · 发表于 2013-10-28 10:29:54

Thank you for your reply. The reason why you see the samples that have many "I" is that the examinors can master it better thant you. This is becuase thay are native speaker and their English is far more natural thank you . My ielts teacher told me that in the ielts, first of all, you language should be natural and fluent. This advise is not only suitablt for writing but speaking as well.

We are not native speaker and our english is originally not natural. So we can not completely copy the sample's writing style. You should have your own style and find someone who is native speaker or can handle ielts writing well to refine and make your writing natural and fluent. This is also why I attended ielts class in Brisbane before I achieved four 7.5...

短发的 · 发表于 2013-10-28 14:40:44

As the saying goes, one man's meat may be another man's poison。 So，我认为，你的这种写法与我的这种写法并无矛盾，适合自己就行。All roads lead to Rome.

另，我的外教，一位具有3年雅思考官经验的美国人，从来没说过我这种写法有任何问题——我给他看过几十篇习作。

Alenasort · 发表于 2013-10-28 16:12:43

That's NOT about the naturality of language itself.It's about the context of the task you are trying to accomplish. The real application of writing task 2 is to write a real essay which requires objectivity of the author. It means don't use personal references in it.

Maybe the officials added those words in examples just to tell us "Relax,test-takers. Task 2 is not a real essay.You can write whatever you feel comfortable with."

爱尔兰香槟 · 发表于 2013-10-28 20:56:32

我看移民局官网上写着　
There are two IELTS tests—an academic test and a general training test. You need to take only the general test unless otherwise advised by your skills assessing authority.

fr6v5h5b · 发表于 2013-10-29 01:40:03

格斗士，您的外教的辅导方式是上课呢？还是看习作呢？收费标准能否介绍一下。我想在某淘上找个看习作的雅思老师，可是大部分很难辨别真假。

jsbhua7701 · 发表于 2013-10-29 09:27:46

you are right, you should have your own style of ielts. I am glad to hear you have a ielts tutor for your ielts exam. are you doing your ielts in China?

DoozyDorsDiva · 发表于 2013-10-29 16:47:46

what I said is from a local ielts teacher in australia. I think you are right. I want to add that topic is the one thing ,ietls is aiming to test your english primarily. So it is essential to master english well such as sentance and word selection.

Speaking of the context and idea of eassy, ielts just tests you how could you use english to express idea and support or argue it.

短发的 · 发表于 2013-10-29 17:19:03

俺从来没出过国。

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