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发表于 2011-11-11 09:13:31
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来自： INNA
现学现用， 改写了一篇， 原来我有这么多的话要说呀， LZ 是大好人呀。
主体段2 还有待改善， 主要是字已经超了， 所以没说透彻。
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Some people prefer to provide help and support for those in their
local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national
and international charitable organizations. Discuss both view and five
your own opinion.
It is obvious that different people choose varied ways to contribute to charity. Some people give a helping hand to the local Community, while others favour supporting national and worldwide charitable groups financially. Means of charity are really crucial since they lead to so distinctive results.
Supporting the local community is much easier to carry out and monitor.
People are more familiar with the status and know who really need help. Therefore, they can directly help the local organization or individual solve issues. Compared with other forms of charity, this kind of support can give more money to the community and can put into action more quickly. Moreover, contributors can easily monitor whether the local community allocates the money to targeted places. This can make the donation more transparency and avoid possible misuse of funds. For example, an individual, funding lunches for all students in the domestic high school, can go to the dining hall to verify whether his money is spent on improving dinners and building healthy menus. However, this view may not help plenty of people since it only focuses on the local area. Indeed, the world is full of problems and so many people need instant support.
By contrast, as large charitable organizations open plenty of branches
everywhere, they can help much more people. For example, in the Wenchun earthquake, a great deal of help from worldwide charitable rganoizations strongly supports the recovery and relief. Without those, people’s lives in Wenchun can not go back to normal so quickly. Despite that, low percentage of funds used in actual charity work and long duration to implement the plan are criticised by the public. Specifically, the cost to maintain such kind of organization should be a lot higher. Sometimes, it may take longer to implement the charity plan because of loads of processes ad procedures to follow.
To sum up, helping the local community offers more benefits to charity
since it is highly efficient and easy to control. However, in huge disasters, the involvement of the global organizations is also necessary.
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