最难缠钉子户
发表于 2010-12-24 06:11:09
那就跟帖写作文，好不？
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2010-12-24 17:48:27
The third essay
Some people think that the traffic and environmental problems in cities can be solved by moving the factories and businesses in cities to the rural area. Do you agree or disagree with this thought?
Answer:
In present-day society, there are increasingly severe traffic congestion and air and water pollution in some cities. For the sake of resolve these problem, whether the factories and companies should be relocated to the rural are or not, that has been a topic of controversy.
Indeed, vehicles afford people who live in the cities more convenient, at the meantime, increasing numbers of cars not only put a strain on the already crowded ground but also aggravate the air pollution, especially some heavy trucks from factories and companies. A vast deal of exhaust gas has been discharged to the air by autoos, and factories trend to do the same things. For instance, a chemical manufactory would continue to emit large quantities of poisonous gas to the air and the effluent sewage made by this factory would drain into the river as well. At this rate, It is seem like that to relocate the manufactories and enterprises to the countryside could be beneficial to combat these problems.
I assume that if all of the factories and corporations have gone away from the city, obviously, the running cars' quantity in the city would be reduced to a reasonable level and could never see a heavy truck again, and the air and water would be increasingly clear. Subsequently, the people who live in this city would be hard to find a job as all the companies and factories have gone. Thus, people has to drive a long way to work, even relocate to countryside for the sake of work. In all likelihood, the countryside would become a new city and the previous city would become a new rural area.
In summary, to relocate the enterprises and manufactories could improve the situation, but we should choose them to move out, which are really detrimental to the traffic and environment, rather than move out them all.
张哎墨
发表于 2010-12-25 05:31:44
唉，看到LZ这样真是感动，我也在准备雅思考试，要考到6.5才能去AU读研究生，已经有6年没有摸过英语了，感觉真的是很难。跟着楼住一块努力吧，加油
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2010-12-25 12:12:22
I'm sure my hard work will pay off!
Fighting!
aubx2798
发表于 2010-12-25 18:12:02
谢谢分享！一起加油加油！
tpougueyh
发表于 2010-12-26 06:02:42
lz你挺棒的
加油吧
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2010-12-26 17:37:43
The fourth essay
Detailed description of crimes in the media leads to negative consequences in society so this kind of information should be limited. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Answer:
In contemporary soceirty, prevalent media are available to the people, some of them are inundated with particular criminal details, then whether media should report offences in graphic details or not has been a topic of discussion.
No doubt that, people normally hold fierce curiosity about criminal acts, thus news outlets could boost their sales or audience rating efficiently through reporting them. Likewise, the people who are law-abiding could acquire knowledge like how to avoid the crime and protect themselves through watching these news or programs. As a consequence, probably, the incidence of crime should be reduced and the society should trend to be increasingly stable. However, in fact, on the other hand the rest people could simulate the criminal acts what they have watched on TV or newspapers.
It is because of details, the gratuitous violent contents in criminal reporting could driving up the crime rate, Especially the incidence of juvenile delinquency. The underage youngsters have not excellently capable of distinguish right from bad. They are sometimes just the passive receptacles of predigested ideas and trend to simulate things what they have been seen. Similarly, some people who hold a grudge against society might simulate the criminal acts which have shown on TV to jeopardise societal stability. Additionally, reporting offences in particular details could gravely traumatise the victims who have already lived in misery because of these crimes.
All in all, detailed description of crimes should be restricted to the limit. Instead, the media could disseminate the information for the sake of giving the education of security and self-defence to prople.
hithauthowl
发表于 2010-12-27 01:21:17
LZ加油， 坚持就是胜利。
顺便偷学一下你的方法
随风西行2009
发表于 2010-12-27 10:13:49
楼主你太赞了！有这个恒心一定会成功的！加油！
rlke5218
发表于 2010-12-27 13:30:19
LZ你只需要拿4个6吧，建议看看这位同学的文章
http://www.hioz.net/ibbs/thread-936147-1-1.html#
写作6分不需要那么多大词，用得又不准确，很影响考官的阅读感
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