最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-15 22:48:50
First, I'm so happy because my essay never achieve such a high estimate. Thank you very much. This has became a huge motivation to stimulate me to keep working.
Then, I think that your English has quite well. If you'd spend time to do more exercises, you definitely can reach your target.
You see, I have learnt you, which writing everthing in English. You have English skill I very envied. There we go. Let's take it,IELTS!
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最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-16 05:19:30
The eighteenth essay
News media has become influential to our life nowadays. Some people think that it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer:
In this day and age, news media have swayed people's daily lives increasingly. Subsequently, whether it is a negative development or a positive development, that has become a topic of controversy.
No doubt that, people could benefit from some useful news media. First and foremost, some contents of news media are informative such as useful advertisements. People could find their requirements rapidly via these commercials. Similarly, some media are inundated with educational contents, and they are entertaining as well. Thus parents would be plenty delighted as their children would be quite to please to watch them thereby gaining diversions and knowledge at the same time. Furthermore, people always could get information for current affairs through news media. And these alway the main access for people to know what has happened in their own country or in other countries.
However, everything have reverse sides. Some news media might be harmful to people. Like false advertisings could mislead people to buy things which are unworthy of the name. Besides, unauthentic accounts could enable news outlets to boost their audience rating but sacrificing people's in particular celebrities' reputations. Likewise, For the sake of boosting audience rating. Some news outlets even air some programs to people, which are saturated with violent and pornographic contents. These sort of programs would severely impact not only children but also society thereby driving up the incidence of crime.
Summarily, in my opinion, the development of news media has positive effects and negative effects as well. To some extent, I agree with that useful news media should be encouraged, and the false and unauthenic accounts should be restricted. By that, it is a really positive development of news media.
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-16 16:40:55
I'm so confuse that if change test type to class A? Somebody help me please.
想想念
发表于 2011-1-16 18:27:11
Do you mean you wanna change class G to A?
Absolutely yes! Cos' if you get the same number of correct answers, you'll get higher score in class A though it's much more difficult than class G.
Well ,from my opinion ,it would be better to have a test in class A. It will support you not only in migration process but also in your future academic studies if you wanna to take part in.
So ,good luck!
Praineeunussy
发表于 2011-1-16 22:31:42
闪动你的精神很让我鼓舞，1月15号就要考试了，还是缺乏紧迫感。
从今天开始每天跟着LZ写作文，互相批改，互相提高。加油
eihks623
发表于 2011-1-17 04:06:13
纸上写了一个小时，打出来的时候又改了不少，考试情况下肯定还连这个水平都写不到，继续努力！
News media has become influential to our life nowadays. Some people think that it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that the information provided by news media (e.g. newspapers, television, radio and internet) has a tremendous impact on people’s daily lives. Whether ordinary people and society could benefit from such information has sparked controversy recently. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon will continue to overweigh its disadvantages.
Generally, the news reported by most media is proved to be accurate and instant, which benefits both individuals and society. First of all, it is human nature to be curious about what is happening around, as the best decision can be made only if there is enough information provided. News media influence people when they need to make decisions, such as selecting a career and running what kind of business. The resources of society are relocated and redirected reasonably in this way. Moreover, news media plays an important role in instilling high moral values by reporting incidents with good or bad examples. The good discipline will gradually be accepted and admitted. Also, revealing scandals like corruption will help to monitor and boost efficiency in government behaviours.
However, news media could have negative effect as well. Some news could be over-exaggerated, misleading or even false, as a large proportion of news media companies are economically motivated, they may only care about how many people will be interested in the content, regardless of truth. People may end up misjudging the situation after receiving wrong information. Nevertheless, as we are living in a open-minded society, there could be various voices about the same incident in different aspects. Still, people have their own judgement and usually the truth will be revealed by time.
In conclusion, news media, as a way of transmitting information, is more and more crucial in contemporary society. This is an irreversible trend and people will continue to benefit from it.
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-17 13:40:29
Tomorrow Topic
12/11 G class writing forecast 11
Some people believe individuals are more important in taking care of environment, others thinks governments should be major responsible to it. Discuss and give your opinion.
I'm on duty now and will be later to come here tomorrow. Play Up!
寂寞小零
发表于 2011-1-17 19:10:41
Newsmedia has become influential to our life nowadays. Some people think that it isa negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer:
In this day and age, news media have swayedpeople's daily lives increasingly. Subsequently,（这个地方逻辑关系用consequently应该更恰当，subsequently是时间先后顺序） whether it is a negative development ora positive development, that (去掉,这个地方你用that是想写什么从句呢？)has become a topic of controversy.
No doubt that, people could benefit from someuseful news media. First and foremost, some contents of news media areinformative such as useful advertisements(我个人认为，题目是news media对人的影响，谈到广告有点偏了). People could find their requirementsrapidly via these commercials. Similarly, some media are inundated witheducational contents(inundate偏贬义，是泛滥，充斥的意思，我建议可以说some media provide people with abundanteducational contents。), and they are entertaining as well. Thus parents would be plenty delighted as(用了thus就不要再用as，英文中，因为和所以只能说其中一个) their children would be quite
to(去掉)
please to watch them thereby gainingdiversions and knowledge at the same time. Furthermore, people always could getinformation for current affairs through news media. And these is
always the main access for people to knowwhat has happened in their own country or in other countries.
However, everything have(has) reverse sides. Some news media might beharmful to people. Like false advertisings could mislead people to buy thingswhich are unworthyof the name(这个短语不懂。。). Besides, unauthentic accounts couldenable news outlets to boost their audience rating but sacrificing(sacrifice,位于动词和前面的并列句中的boost一致) people's in particular celebrities'reputations. Likewise, For the sake of boosting audience rating. Some newsoutlets even air some programs to people, which are saturated with violent andpornographic contents. These sort of programs would severely impact not onlychildren but also society thereby driving up the incidence of crime.(thereby前面用过了，句式多换换)
Summarily, in my opinion, the development of newsmedia has positive effects and negative effects as well. To some extent, Iagree with that useful news media should be encouraged, and the false andunauthenic accounts should be restricted. By that, it is a really positivedevelopment of news media.
PS：我查词典里media是medium的复数，不过题目里谓语动词用的是单数，这个问题需要请版里的高手们解答一下了
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戮妖
发表于 2011-1-17 21:00:39
握手！我也是十五号考，华东师大。
好运！
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-18 04:53:25
Yes, that's why I confuse. And It seems like The Task1 of A class is easier than The G class's.