老师说我的作文perfect，不用修改，我很怀疑我的水平，欢迎拍砖
请了一个外教教口语，顺便给我看看作文，不过改动很少，最近的一篇竟然说很好，不用改。<br />
我很是表示怀疑，我确认我到不了perfect的水平，估计离reasonable也还有段距离，是不是她在敷衍我？<br />
我在这里贴出来，请大家帮忙指出我的错误，不怕拍砖，越狠越好，谢谢大家。<br />
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Homework: at least 250 words<br />
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. <br />
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.<br />
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With the rapid development of the society, some people tend to change their job after working at the same position for a period of time, although others prefer to engage the similar issue in their lives. In my point of view, I prefer to live a same life without some changes.<br />
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Living unchanged lives can lead to some positive effects. First, long period of time on working the similar issue can give individuals a chance to become experts of certain areas, such as scientists, doctors and the like. If they could devote themselves entirely to their subjects with their whole lives, success could not be a luxury for them. Second, their families could be benefited from their working conditions, as they can provide their families with steady lives. Their family members do not need to move everywhere, if they can keep on doing the same job. Finally, it can strengthen their willpowers. Doing the same work may be boring and uninteresting; however, if individuals can successfully control their negative feelings, they can get strong minds.<br />
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Admittedly, changing jobs can obviously get some advantages for them. As everything has its special characters, with changing their status, they can experience different senses from kinds of careers. But they would loss their chances to be experts of certain areas. Furthermore, changing their lifestyles may be enjoyable sometimes. As a result, unemployment can possibly hit them, which could greatly affect their families’ living qualities.<br />
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In conclusion, I prefer to live an unchanged life, even though changes seem such funny and interesting.<br />
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按照kuthlaav同学的意见，改了几个错别字，其他暂时没有变化，留给大家拍砖。<br />
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取决与你要几分哈，4分5分的要求么，perfect了，
要求4个6，6分就够了。
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life>job
放开一点思路会不会容易写的充实一点
确实如此，不过我感觉life的概念太大了，不太好写，容易跑题，就揪住job写了。
基本功扎实，词汇运用准确，没有语法错误，我认为7分肯定没问题。
真的呀？我太激动了，不知道几雅了，写作越写分越低，最近才改变思路，按照最简单的结构去准备，不那么花哨，不用不太了解的大词，但愿能起作用。
你的话是一个很大的鼓励，非常感谢。
语法，单词拼写不出错，不是全部都是简单句，表达了你的看法，基本就六分了。
单词运用准确，有少许高级词汇，看法的表达能运用程度的区别，就七分了。
这是我的理解。
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一看就是看过小姨的<十天>, 和我写的路子一样一样一样的, 呵呵
对呀，最开始就是受他的书影响，然后又看好多人说不要那样写，结果自己做实验的结果就是惨败，当然也有水平问题。
我现在觉得简单的就很美，前提是要写的到位准确，这样6分应该能达到了。
想要7分，就要跳出小姨的书了。